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Never Give Up
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Ooh ... yeah.
If you're dispointed,
dont leave, and hang your head.
I just told you, never to say,
"I wanna give up, and go to bed ..."
I want you to stand up straight, and start to
move.
(chrous)
Never Give up,
on what you'll really have,
for i believe you will be successful,
even if you cry.
(end chorus)
Dont go, and just lay there,
i want you you to come, here.
so dont go, and lay.
I want you, to be strong, and never
cloose to stay along ...
Just be, outta of your mind,
and come explore ...
(Chorusx2)
Come and explore with me ....
By music makin' miley |
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Yikes! I don't mean this in a mean way but that last song is terrible. |
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i know ... that one IS terrible ... |
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My Time (By MileyFan500)
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Ooh,
Its almost Time for me to find,
all the things is didint want.
in my mind,
i start to see,
the real me.
(CHORUS)
My Time To shine,
between thoose lines,
i didnt do a single crime,
but it's my time.
(CHORUS END)
Yesterday, i found a way,
to say, "Hey!"
Not a single line,
between my eyes,
tthat i see ...
So i can be me ...
(Chorus)
That all,
that i heard,
for almost anything ....
Yeah ...
(CHORUS X2)
Ooh ....
(By MileyFan500 (me))
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rikkiJoin Date: 2007-10-21
Post Count: 987 |
Dats wiggity-wiggity-wiggity-whack, yo!
(Translation: Cool!) |
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Silver Snow by fuzzykid45
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Oh why....
Oh why....
Why did you leave me in the silver snow
Oh how,Oh why,I want to know
Don't leave me there ever again
I just want my life to end
(Chorus)
Silver snow..
Silver snow..
I don't want to live anymore...
I don't care about life anymore...
Just leave me here to die..
Silver snow..
Never hurt me,not again
I just want the world to end
I wish live had a reset switch
Oh how I want to die..
(Chorus)
Silver Snow..
Silver Snow..
I don't want to live anymore...
I don't care about live anymore...
Just leave me here to die..
Silver snow..
Go ahead and leave me out here in the
Silver Snow...
Silver snow...
Silver snow..
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Wowza! Great song.
Work on the CHORUS though.
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gageazJoin Date: 2007-06-28
Post Count: 7850 |
"Careless" by Unknown Substance
It's not really meant to rhyme, just meant to be epic
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Well, all the life givers
Now they're sitting in trees
Looking down at us
Shooting down as they please
(break)
But all the young people
All the young kids
They didn't care
None the less
They didn't care
(break)
If they were to take life
They'd be indian traders
Shooting down at all the
All of the saints
(break)
All that you knew were the spirits of life
They were all just backstabbers
But noone even cared
No one at all
All just the spirits of life
(break)
And everyone you knew was just careless
Everyone you knew was just careless
Everything you had done was just careless
All of your recklessness was careless
(break)
Well, all the life givers
They got down from their trees
Became some of us
Felt all of our pain
(break)
And everyone you knew was just careless
Everyone you knew was just careless
Everything you had done was just careless
All of your recklessness was careless
(break)
And all of everyones life
Yeah all of everyones life
All of every civiliians life
It was all just...
Careless |
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SprocketJoin Date: 2008-10-03
Post Count: 4101 |
*chimes start**Bells ring**piano starts**chimes end**Bells end**silence*i find it funny,how everytime i try and every endeveaour i attempt is never enough...its never e...*vocal shoots up*NOUGH!!ITS NEVER ENOUGH!*silence**piano starts mmm-m-mmm-mmm-m-...*NO MATTER...NO...MATTER!NO MATTER! NO MATTER!!ITS NEVER ENOUGH!ITS ALWAYS AN ANOMOLY!ITS ALWAYS A REASON...o-of-voi-oice.*chimes ring across a distance*im working on the rest.the sound is amazing though! |
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SprocketJoin Date: 2008-10-03
Post Count: 4101 |
*guitar starts at low rate*ner-ner-ner-ner-ner-ner-ner-ner i guess uve never heard.made eviction and the fall of reasoning well in my head i think of what you mean to tell,i did my time that serves me well,im fallen,im fallen,NOW IM IN OVER MY HEAD!WITH SOMETHIN I SAID!I DINNALY REALiZE IM Betta off dead.
i risked it falling for it...who said it..was easy..to forget...WHO SAID WAS EASY TO COMPLICATE THINGS!!NOW IM IN OVER MY HEAD!WITH SOMETHING I SAID!I FINNALY REALIZE IM BETTER OFF DEAD!!I WANNA PUT IT BACK TOGETHAA!!!!!AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
heres a link to grainy version i recorded.
half the lyrics i forgot.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hof5uf395q8&feature=related |
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rikkiJoin Date: 2007-10-21
Post Count: 987 |
This was probably one of the hardest songs I've ever written, (probably because this is the truest song that I've made) but feel free to laugh if its not that great. Well, I really hope ya like it. Good luck to all you other song makers. Music is the war-cry of the soul.
"Leaves of a Clover (Ain't much)" By Rockin' rikki March 7th, 2009
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The last time we met I-was-dumb,
We didn't have so-much-fun,
I though we could start ova-aaarrrr,
So I give you the-leaves-of-a-clover!
Now please don' run,
Cause' I've planned us a day-in-the-sun!
The leaves of-a-clover-ain't-muuuuuuuuch,
But I really wanna feel-your-tooooooouuch,
I know I was wrong to-ooo-be-a-raaaaaatt,
Please don' think of thaaa-ah-ah-ahahhtt...
Not now, nor eva;
Please, I know-I-wasn't-cleva-ah!
Just jump into mai-e-arms,
And we'll go faaaaaarrr...
Faaaaaaaarrrr frooooooom he-eeeheaarrr...
Please don' get-in-your-car,
Ohh, you know-who-I-ah-arrrrrr!!
Just-come-with-me,
Give-me-a-second-chah-ah-aaahnnce!!!
We'll-go-to-a-club and weeeeee'll daaaaaaance...
Just a little ROOOO-MAH-AHN-AHHHNNCE!!!
C'mon, don' hold daaat staaaance,
(Just dance,)
Just-a-little-ro-mahn-ahn-ahnnce!!
(Give it a chance!)
Come-with-me-tonight,
And-I'll-show-you-my-love-to-yooouuu,
I'll say somethin'... Thaaaaats truuuuuuuuuuuue...
The leaves of-a-clover-ain't-muuuuuuuuch,
But I really wanna feel-your-tooooooouuch,
I know I was wrong to-ooo-be-a-raaaaaatt,
Please don' think of thaaa-ah-ah-ahahhtt...
Not now, nor eva;
Please, I know-I-wasn't-cleva-ah!
Just jump into mai-e-arms,
And we'll go faaaaaarrr...
Faaaaaaaarrrr frooooooom he-eeeheaarrr...
Salvation ihhssss neeeeaaaaaarrrr...
Come ova he-eee-eee-eaaarrr...
Don' walk awaaaaayyy...
Not until ah Saaay-ay-aaaayyyy,
The leaves of-a-clover-ain't-muuuuuuuuch,
But I really wanna feel-your-tooooooouuch,
I know I was wrong to-ooo-be-a-raaaaaatt,
Please don' think of thaaa-ah-ah-ahahhtt...
Why wouldn't I say sah-oah-ree-eee-eee?
Please just come with meeeeeee-eee-eeeeeeeeee...
Why ussss?
Why weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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rikki, wow. Uh-Cool. Well, not really.
i think it's different then all the others. |
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kt007Join Date: 2008-04-22
Post Count: 225 |
henry hoduni escapes once again,once again... thats all for rite now i got to think of more to it. |
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Hey i'm working on these:
Livin' on a star
Dreams
Dance
Death |
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Work It
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Last time i saw your face,
you mad and sad.
If you'd know what i'd done,
you would've been happy ...
i finally ... Won.
(CHORUS)
You gotta work it.
You gotta work it strong.
Work it cuz i know this is where you belong.
yeah
Work it like a super hero.
Work it like you mean it today.
(Chorus end)
last time i heard,
you were so happy,
but then your happiness,
faded away ....
(CHORUS X2)
Ooh ... work it ...
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No Way
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Hey, 2day, i started 2 say,
i never ment it,
but it was true,
it made me blue ....
NO WAY AM I GONNA GIVE UP?
thats all i got ... |
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KenuJoin Date: 2007-11-25
Post Count: 304 |
Yo Pee-Poles! AHMA BACK-A!!! Errr... sorry. I get excited =D |
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KenuJoin Date: 2007-11-25
Post Count: 304 |
Rikki shood bee hee-rrr suon! Jest whad do yah meen bye "uh, not rely" ANY-WAYYZ?!?!?!?! DID JOO SAY IT WAZ-ENT KOO-EWL?!!!!! |
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