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rikkiJoin Date: 2007-10-21
Post Count: 987 |
Uh- he was correct though. Here I am! Only... I can't think of a song. =C |
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rikkiJoin Date: 2007-10-21
Post Count: 987 |
Aha! I have one!
"Movin' On" By rikki May 3rd, 2009
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Whyyyyyy, do people crrrrryyyyyyy? When their father dieeees...
They should be happy heeee-moved-onnnn...
Why say you're without him?! For he's right there next to yoooooouuuuuuuu!!
No-one ever true-leeee leaves,
NOOOOO-ONE ever true-leeeeee dah,ah-ah-ah-ahhhhhs!!
When you think they're goooone,
They are- just- movin' OOOOOOOONNNNN!!!
...But they're still right next to yooooouuuuu...
You cry and cry, but cannot be soothed...
But be HAPPY CUZ THEIR MOVIN' OOONNNNNN!!!
MOVIN' ON FRUUUUH-MMMMMM HE-RRR!!!
He's MOVIN' OOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNnnn... but he's sti-illl heeeeeerrrrrrrrre. |
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BENZIN2Join Date: 2008-05-19
Post Count: 10652 |
Here's my song:
A B C D E F G H I J K LMNOP Q R S T U V W X Y and Z. YAY. |
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Movin' On ... Rikki ... No offfense but that's kinda ... weak.
You start the chorus right at the begginging. |
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weirrdowJoin Date: 2009-04-07
Post Count: 1 |
hgfghdsdsaukhfgf |
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ok i'm new don't make fun of my song(s) |
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Don't say u love me
got intorduced to u by a friend u set the trend yes u did
the next thing u now we were dow at the theater sittin ther u said u loved me whats that about
your movin to fast i don't understand u i'm not ready yet baby i can't pretend no i can't the bset thing i can do is to tell u to just talk to me pissible love will find a way (love a'll find a way)
don't say u love me u hardly know me if u realy want me then just give me a while justg give me awhile*
thats all i have for now |
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AlphaicXJoin Date: 2008-02-28
Post Count: 5341 |
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Oh, I'm the oppistie of that song. -Gives thumbs down-
Sorry. It's just all negative. Not all Positive. |
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LeiagirlJoin Date: 2008-11-02
Post Count: 419 |
Miley, it may seem gloomy, but its a good song. It has rhythm and the rhymes are great! |
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your right ... It has a good tune. Not the message. |
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Listen Up
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The last time i wanted to tell you,
a sec-ret,
was when I wanted, you.
Now My head is in a spin,
I wish I oculd
win. But, nah,
I will do it all over again.
Oh, just Listen Up,
I'm in a fit, move on in,
Dont get hit, I wanted a little space
but you just invaded me,
Just Listen Up!
You talked to me,
said I was beautiful.
You cheated,
now i dont want to be.
You never talked the talk,
or walked the walk,
you were just cryin'
out my name.
Your drivin' me insane ...
Oh, Listen Up,
i'm in a fit, move on in,
dont get hit, i wanted a little space,
but you invaded me,
Just Listen Up!
(Softer)
Oh, I, wanted you ...
Now, I hate you,
just have to yell,
I wanted to go to hell ...
Just Listen Up,
I'm in a fit, move on in,
dont get hit, i wanted some space,
but you invaded me,
Just Listen, Just Listen, Juussst Lissssteeennn UP!
Writen by,
Miley01804 (M0) |
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Love
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If I never had you,
I would've been alone,
I would have not be talking to you,
on my cell phone,
So ill say it now, I'll say it clear,
I hope I'm talkin' loud enough
so you can hear.
If I hadn't found Love,
I would've been alonem,
My Love is you, so dont
argue, dont yell, I know
it's true.
If i hadn't seen you,
down my hall,
I would've taken the fall,
If i didn't know you,
I would've lost my spirt,
Only I can say i Love you,
'cuz I am the one,
In Love.
If I hadn't found Love,
I wouldv'e been alone,
My Love is you, so dont
argue, dont yell,
i know it's true.
Just chill,
I have you,
It's not that I kissed you,
It's not that You got it wrong,
It's not because i'm singing this song,
I just Love, you, 'cuz it's true.
Just Chill.
l-o-v-e ...
Written By,
M0 |
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ffiona282Join Date: 2008-03-12
Post Count: 3484 |
AVERAGE ORDINARY GIRL
She's the girl you see every day at school
You look at her she looks at yo-o-ou
her cheeks are red,
and she turns down her head
brown hair, black eyes
aver-age hight and size
oh that description fits me,
don't you see?
CHORUS-
in a place, out of place,
I am just whats-her-face
starin' at him,
I'm out on a limb,
Someone save me from certain death,
whoa-oh!
if I dye my hair green,
will you still be so mean?
if my eyes wer gold,
would you still be so cold?
questions, to my self
does he hate me?
will he date me?
do I hate him?
can't figure out my life!
I'm out with my friends
He comes round the bend
I stop and stare,
gotta check my hair!
(sing chorus)
and now we're on our first date,
wonder if we're soulmates?
and then he saw her, he saw her!
in a place, out of place,
I'm STILL just whats-her-face
he's starin at her
the rest of the night passes like a blur
when he says goodbye,
can't even look me in the eye!
and I said,
"look, let's just be friends,
I think this needs to end,
while it still can,"
while it still can!
people will talk,
but I will walk,
walk awa-a-ay!
I'm not your average ordinary girl
(guy solo)
in a place, out of place,
I am just whats-his-face
I'm starin' at her, oh,
she's not your average ordinary girl... |
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REALLY LONG. REALLY GOOD. REALLY RHYIMG.
Good. |
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ffiona282Join Date: 2008-03-12
Post Count: 3484 |
REALLY LONG. REALLY GOOD. REALLY RHYIMG.
Good.
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Mine? Thanks you :D |
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LeiagirlJoin Date: 2008-11-02
Post Count: 419 |
Ffiona, I LOVE your song. Mine are utter rubbish compared to yours. (I seriously mean that. Happiness, what was I thinking?) |
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how come'
each time
i fall in
love'
my heart just
ends up gettin
hurt' what is
love somtin
you fallin and
out it again'
or is love somtin
you love someone
and she loves'
or is love
some made'
up word ppl
made up'
thats the best i got not really i can do better but im kinnda tired right now |
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ffiona282Join Date: 2008-03-12
Post Count: 3484 |
Wow, I'm surprised so many people like my song! I just wrote it in class one day. I have plenty of free time. People, heads up for another song by yours truly soon! |
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Video Games
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The screen is flashin'
i'm attackin' these
robots, my mind is
overflowing, with things
i should leave behind.
the last finger touch,
they die. so do i....
Lets put 'em away i
dont wanna see them again to day,
I wanna stop all these Video Games,
I'm sick an' tired, go outside,
lets put away these
video games.
I'm walkin' in a hall,
I trip and fall, I loose
my balance, I can't
see, beacuse I'm busy,
attacking bee's.
lets put 'em away i
dont wanna see them again today,
I wanna stop all these Video Games,
I'm sick an' tired. go outside,
lets put away all these video games.
M0 |
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Guys, will you write some things in here? |
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LegoLeahJoin Date: 2008-10-26
Post Count: 1368 |
Every step to fate
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Every step i take
Every breath i make
I feel like fate is not giving me another chance
To be with you...
CHORUS
Every step to fate
Every step to unfortune
Every step to fate
Every step to misery
Every step to fate
Nothing I do can make it better
Why be such a go getter?
It's horrible to stay in a shadow
To be without you...
CHORUS
Bridge
Nothing to declare
Nothing to love
Nothing to be
No fate at all
CHORUS X2 |
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SprocketJoin Date: 2008-10-03
Post Count: 4101 |
Guerilla
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*Whispering* It has to start somewhere. It has to start sometime.
What better place, what better time? Than now.
How long? Not long. 'Cuz what you reap, is what you sew.
This won't won't last forever.
You say you are the end.
But I say, I am the beginning.
You say you want peace.
But I say, I want Anarchy.
I want Guerilla.
I want the beginning.
It's time to Wake Up, America.
It's time to Wake Up, the Human Race, it's Apocalypse coming for a visit.
And It's Because of us.
Turn it on. Turn it on.
They are Broadcasting.
Broadcasting the lives of a riot flooding the street.
Shoving the truth down our throats until we become just one comotose case dead from the wreak of the filth from the Government.
It's Guerilla. It's Guerilla.
They've been keeping us inside for too long.
Gunshots filling the air. Fists in the air in land of the 'Free'
The dead bodies flooding the Earth.
Mankind is it's own entity.
This place we called home is nothing but a futile spec of dust in this unfair game called life.
We walk into obssession and greed every day.
We Wake Up to it every day.
We ask the Government, they have nothing to say. They have nothing to say.
I have no Rhyming skills. |
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LegoLeahJoin Date: 2008-10-26
Post Count: 1368 |
How long?
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You went,you moved on
Now you're comin' home
You went...
And left our love hangin' on the line-e o yeah
The line!
CHORUS
How long til you come home?
How long til we're back together?
How long til I can see you again?
How long til all these things hap-pen?
Look,I'm just an amateur
In lo-ove
I don't know anything
About me or you
You!
CHORUS
Somethings are meant to be
Woo-hoo
We're meant to be
We're magical
We're on the line
And we need to get off...
CHORUSX2(repeat to fade) |
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