Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Ruraltechdeck101, Thomasmclouth, and I were sitting around a meeting table... "You look nervous sir," said rural. "Just a little," I said, "That first shot fired at VAK was a mistake, he didn't mean to do it, he was just defending himself." "We did not start this war sir," said tom. " I am just afraid the might retaliate," I said. 5 minutes went by and no one said a word. We quickly jumped from our seats for we heard gunfire outside of equinox. The first of hundreds of VAK were attacking equinox. "This does not look good," said Tom. "Tom ready the airforce," I said, "and rural, we need some intel, ready the spies." "Yes sir!" they both said. "This is Izz calling for backup at equinox do you read me." No answer. "We need backup." Finally an admiral picked up, good god, this is massive. Little did we know that soon, one of the biggest raids ever organized on roblox was going to happen. Two days later... "Great job guys, you have done well," I said. Rural came running in, "Izz, Izz! We have received intel on what is happening, VAK may possibly be gaining more people to help destroy us. They may be meeting with other enemy clans to help them!" "We need to report this," said Tom. "No not yet, not until the right time. I have a feeling this war might end badly. This good be the start of roblox war 3. We don't need more enemies right now its bad enoough already." Suddenly a VAK soldier burst throught the door and shoots me izz in the right shoulder, Rural quickly kills him and Tom rushes over with a medical kit. "Izz are you alright." "Yeah I think so, just let me go." Izz passes out and wakes up in a prison at the VAK Swampy Moon Outpost. A VAK soldier comes in, "Give us all your intel!" "Where, where am I," I said. "I will kill you right now, if you don't give me your information!" He shoots me in the stomach. 5 days later I wake up with a RAT squadron standing over me. "Bereza, Mike, 3stone, Rex, man am I glad to see you guys!" "Bring him to the heli", said Bereza. After laying in the hospital for a week, I get discharged and immediately join the war. We find Vaktus at fort equinox and I quickly go there with a squadron. "TDFall, we are largely outnumbered," I said. "We can still do this Izz," said TD. Vaktus comes in on a jetpack and I quickly shoot him. Vaktus brings in back up and gets angry. We fight our way into equinox, finding that VAK has gotten into the armory and has better guns. Gunfire flying back and forth, the squadron is outnumbered in size and strength. VAK kills most of us and we are forced to flee, reinforcements soon arrive and kill off VAK. "That was close," I said, "we almost lost back there, but I have a feeling that this is only the beginning..."
If you guys want more, I will right more soon. |
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vader10Join Date: 2008-07-17
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Sombody doesn't use the return button.. >_> |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Haha sorry I had my paragraphs spaced out but then when I posted it, it didn't turn out right. |
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pick more and put me in it |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Haha, this is a true story actually. Well most of it is. You will actually have to be with me and stuff in order to be in the story. |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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2nd chapter
It is a hot afternoon at celeste, about two weeks after the raid at equinox. Obiwananand , Tom, Ruraltechdeck, and I were in the planes, overlooking celeste for raiders. Everyone is exhausted and we were waiting for a supply drom of ammo, food, and water. We had to resort to eating naturally grown fruit and boiling the salt out of water in the ocean.
Suddenly Tom's plane's left engine started smoking and the plane was slowly going to hit the ground. About 5 feet off the ground Tom jumped out, we quickly spotted the problem, and it wasn't a faulty engine. A spy from the VAK shot the plane down and a VAK squadron soon pulled in on navy boats. I started barking orders. "Obi, we need you on the ground, Tom get on the turrets, Rural man the turret on the heli." Rural and I took out a few VAK with the heli, Tom shot a few incoming ships with a turret and sunk them. The VAK soldiers started swimming slowly to shore. Obi started sniping them with his scouter and soon they started turning back. We had no idea that the celeste attack was just a distraction for what was about to come.
We all quickly piled into my helicopter and started a course to equninox. On the way, we could see a navel fleet waiting outside of equinox, thinking it was the RAT navy, we left them alone. As we got closer, rural noticed an emblem on the side of the ships. It was the sign of VAKtovia. Not having enough time to escape the reach of fire, we got shot down and were forced to land in the water. We quickly sunk, most of us escaped the helicopter in time to swim to the surface. "Is this everybody," I said. "Wheres obi?" Oh no, we all thought, the heli was to far down for any of his to see. Suddenly, somebody swam up to the surface holding obi. It was jjjjj4444. "Thanks jj," I said. "No problem," he said.
We soon got to shore and obi woke up from being unconsious. He told us that his left got caught under the rotor of the heli. We warned everybody about the incoming navel fleet, and we prepared for battle. I stood inside of equinox warning the airforce. The rest of our squadron stood waiting for the incoming ships. As the first half of the ships reached shore, we were extremely outnumbered, but we did have an advantage with our weapons. JJ was manning the turrets, taking out all of the VAK in his reach. The rest of us were guarding the weaker areas in equinox. As most of the ships reached shore, the airforce came in taking out a lot of the ships making their way to shore, and also dropped off care packages and reinforcements. We still did not outnumber the incoming troops, but we still had a little bit of an advantage. JJ and Obi breached the rooms inside of the base, taking out a few VAK, VAK was winning this raid. JJ gets shot in the leg, and all though weak keeps fighting. JJ's medic division quickly comes in and starts helping his leg, he pushes them away, taking out 2 pistols and taking down a squadron of 8 VAK. Meanwhile Obi is on top of the equinox gate with a nexis taking out many VAK soldiers. Rural is protecting with a magnum and a mauler on the top of equinox, shooting the VAK trying to sneak in. Tom and I are warning all RAT personnel about the raid, but we have no radio signal, and on the horizon, is one of the biggest fleets of soldiers anyone has ever seen....
Just tell me to write more if you would like me to write more. I will also put you in the story if you message me. |
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tell more tell tis awsome |
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It's pretty cool.
THIS IS AN ALT |
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Great Izz, I think it would be better with me and my mauler...... But Bravo Bravo!!!!
Locked by Rex |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Haha Rex, I will add you to my next story, I believe I have one in the making! |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Here is the 3rd and final chapter.
My squadron and I were back at celeste planning what to do next. We soon got intel that the huge VAK fleet turned away from equninox and was setting course for Solstice City. On one of those ships was Vaktus. ColourTheory was making an appearance in Solstice city and was about to give a speech. Suddenly the security level went from low to high alert. CODE RED, buzzed the speakers in solstice city. ALL RAT TO POSITIONS. In a panic, my squadron and I was forced to protect an incoming onslaught at celeste. We quickly and easily took down the incoming ships with the help of the airforce at celeste. Meanwhile, solstice city was in a panic...
The VAK ships soon arrived that afternoon, bringing thousands of Vaktovian troops. ColourTheory joined in on the fight. CT and Vaktus finally had there chance to kill one another. Although they were on opposite sides of the city. My squadron was in another part of the city. "Obi, JJ, Rulz, Rural, Tom," I said,"Good luck out there, I am afraid we will not be able to talk for much longer." "What do you mean sir," said Tom. "I mean, we may possibly die out there," I said. The incoming troops were overpowering and were killing a lot of our troops quickly. A few hours later we were still pretty evenly matched. Soon enough, Vaktus and CT made eye contact, only 5 feet away from eachother on the rooftops of Solstice City. "Well this looks like our final battle," said CT. "And I will be the one to prevail," said Vaktus. They both pulled out swords and started deuling eachother. In the middle of their deul, Vaktus slashed CT in the stomach. CT dropped his sword as he fell to the ground. Vaktus, standing with a sword to CT's neck said,"VAK will never fall at the hands of anyone, not even you." Then, Vaktus's eyes widened and Vaktus fell to the ground, a mauler sticking out of his back. CT stabbed him, remembering that Rex had given him a mauler in case of an emergency. "I... I... I underestimated your strength," said Vaktus. As Vaktus drew his last breath, CT pushed him off the roof. The VAK saw what had happened and slowly stepped back toward their ships. Then many RAT helicopters arrived in the sky and landed. A few people ran toward the RAT soldiers, the rest of the generals and colonels of VAK. Rex pulled out his mauler and stabbed Korvak and Pixie. I shot down 4 colonels with a scouter. Rural and Tom shot down a few more each with their cyclones. Rulz also sniped a few with a scouter. Obi stabbed their last general and CT was standing on the rooftop, proud of his fellow soldiers. CT then yelled from the rooftop,"leave while you have the chance, and don't even think about coming back."
A few hours later, CT finally gave his speech. "Today, we have made history, great job fighting you have made me proud. The VAK will not rest thinking they have lost, and will not accept that they lost this war, but they will not dare fight us any longer. We no longer have to worry about them, I don't think they will be coming back..."
Thanks guys for reading my stories. I would be happy to make some more stories and about other wars too if your guys want. Let this story be engraved in RAT history and let this story be our legacy!
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DeopJoin Date: 2010-04-04
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You haven't laid it out properly at all, you can't tell what is going on. |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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I must add one thing to my story, for we lost a great man during the war. Admiral sonic was killed during the war. We may have lost him, but let not his legacy die with him! |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Thanks |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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It appears that I may have to add more to this story, it looks like the VAK might attack us again. |
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put jj in its and make me die in a awsome way |
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Izz1324Join Date: 2009-08-19
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Umm ok? Most people wouldn't want to die but ok. |
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make look like a hero by take 21 vak |
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