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I have been writing a script for a movie about two intenet trolls.
The plot is Bill and Stevie(named after Bill Gates and Steve Jobs) are Troll brothers.They decide to team up to overload Roblox with Trolls(trust me i dont want this to happen for real) but win they do the troll deity sends them to internet Hades to fight for their soul in the trolling competion.If they win they get to keep their soul and live to tell the tale, but if they lose their stuck in internet Hades fo ever.
So what do you think about the plot ? You can give suggestions. |
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way245Join Date: 2006-11-08
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Random. Terrible. Needs to be realistic. |
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Uhh....It was supposed to be a fantasy movie.I dont care im making it anyway. |
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way245Join Date: 2006-11-08
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No but it needs to show some realisticness. If thats a word :D. fine do it yourself, it will never work, nobody is ever going to help you. |
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Dude, you dont need to be so negative. Its a FANTASY-COMEDY.
The whole comedy is that the two brothers are losers because all they do is troll websites.
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way245Join Date: 2006-11-08
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It doesnt sound funny at all. |
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way245Join Date: 2006-11-08
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So can we all agree on thread closed? |
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I havent told you any of the jokes yet!!!
Excerpt from script.
Bill is typing on his computer and he is trolling a user named EpicMan24.
EpicMan24:******!!!I cant take it any more!!!!!!!!!
Bill:I just reported you.
ChatMod:Epic,if you feel the need to talk like a big boy than your going back to prescripted chat starting now.
EpicMan24:No!
EpicMan24:um.....
EpicMan24:I own all your bases.
Bill:Feels handicaped eh ?Now your like a guest.Wait ill try to have a deep conversation using prescripted chat!
Bill:Hi.
Bill:Bye. {exits prescripted chat}
EpicMan24:>:( |
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thats just part of the script. |
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Nope.
No.
Just no.
Not funneh ya hear? |
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Look troll, stop being so negative. At least my story isnt as bad as the telamon one.
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pugjuniorJoin Date: 2008-06-19
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This would be cool if it will actuly be made and be funny. |
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Is this supposed to be in any way, shape, or form related to Fred: The Movie? Nah. fred was a bit funny. What's this? *gets shocked* UHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! That... Was... AWSUMMM!!!!!!! |
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@Above
You'd better be joking or i'll slap you across the dimension.
Oh yeah. I went there. |
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how is this related to fred ? |
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
This idea sucks
And so do you |
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way245Join Date: 2006-11-08
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@harry
And that about sums it up. Goodbye. |
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at least im orginal and dont come up with stupid plots. |
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@Above
This is a stupid plot. Your argument is invalid. |
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at least im orginal.
you cant judge a plot based on its "realistness" (if thats a word).
or its smartness.
At least its not as stupid as that telamon movie idea. |
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