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Chapter 1: The ambush
It was looking to be a good day. But they were wrong. They were all wrong. Lot's were killed because they were wrong. So Desklamp was standing in front of a podium talking to a crowd of 100,000 members which was known as The Assassin Agency. " We have located our elusive enemy to the old shooting range," Desklamp started "Tomorrow we will have a convoy there. First we catch him. Then we squeeze the knowledge of his mysterious clan and then..then we kill him!" Desklamp yelled. the crowd went crazy. They were cheering, clapping, and whistling. Right then Elfassassin91 spotted a dart gun. "GET DOWN!" he yelled as he tackled desklamp to save him! Lionboy9913 and Eliteslash77 and Silversoldier13 dropped down to the ground and pulled out 13cm long Uzi's. Then several men shrouded head to toe with black cloaks on came. Abruptly they pulled out M16's. Then they started shooting. Now more and more shrouded men came. All the members pulled out weapons and started shooting and stabbing. Many people were shot, others were stabbed. Blood spilled on the ground. men dropped lifeless their body's limp. Desklamp, Elfassassin91, Lionboy9913, Eliteslash77, and Silversoldier dropped to the ground still alive. They played dead. The opened blood packs and spilled it's contents on them. The mysterious thought they won. 700 played dead and 300 hundred got away in a stealth like manner. 200 hundred hid right there under bleachers and stages and rubble. The shrouded men left. The leaders on the stage got up and looked bewildered. Blood soaked their clothes. They had to get out of there now. Little did they know it was only the beginning... |
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Chapter 2: Chase.
"What the heck just happened?" Elfassassin91 asked. "We were ambushed and attacked mercilessly." Eliteslash77 said quietly. "I say we hijack that car take it's weapons and drive off" said Silversoldier13 pointing to a car. Then desklamp broke the car window with his elbow. He then pressed the unlock button. Then they climbed in. Desklamp pulled out a knife and opened a small campartment by unscrewing it and in there was the keys. He plugged them in. The engine roared with life. Then they sped off. Everybody but desklamp had their Uzi's pulled out and pointed out the windows. Suddenly a black car appeared. "Uh desklamp I think we have company" said Eliteslash77. Then a window opened on the passenger's side of the car. Then a a man only visible from torso up poked out. He was carrying a RPG! "TURN" they all yelled. Then the missile was fired. Be cause of their tremendous turn the missile hit a different car. It burst into flames and exploded! It was a magnificent show a flames and eruptions. They were on the highway now. Then Silversoldier13 shot the man with the RPG. The man's limp body fell out of the car and tumbled on the road leaving blood behind. The black car's driver swore. Then a man carrying a 1919 browning popped out of the side hatch. He shot. It hit the back of the car and left dents. Eliteslash77 pulled out a M60. He shot the man. Then he shot the hood of the black car. Eventually it broke off. Eliteslash77 ducked back in to reload. His heart was racing. He popped out again. Eliteslash77 shot the engine of the black car. It erupted with flames and exploded. It sent the flaming black car flying. In the air the car blew in half probably killing all the men inside. Eliteslash77 ducked back in and relaxed. Desklamp said "Oh no there is a road block." Then there were bunches of black cars the blocked the path to a open bridge. "Ram the sign!" Lionboy9913 yelled. They colided with the sign sending bits of the roadblock sign everywhere. The T.A.A. leader's car went flying threw the open air, and landed on the other side of the bridge. Everybody cheered! But it was not over. Then black cars were all behind them. Our hero's car was headed for a dead end. "On three we jump," Elfassassin91 started "1..2...3 JUMP!" They all jumped out of the car and landed in a ditch. The car rammed in to the brick wall. It exploded in a horrific frenzy of fire and car bits. The black cars turned around and sped away. Those men thought they had won. The T.A.A. leaders went into a building where they could get help. They were gonna get help. Even if they had to use brute force to get it... |
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Chapter 3:Intel
Our heroes all pulled out 7cm desert eagles. "Be Stealthy men don't make a noise. We want to apprehend our informative with out alerting anybody else." Desklamp whispered. They went up some stairs and onto a balcony that over looked a crowd of people. "Time to make a distraction" Eliteslash77 said aiming his pistol. He pulled the trigger. Then a gunshot happened. The bullet flew and hit a window. The window shattered with a deafening crash. Some people noticed but, not all. With Eliteslash77's semi-automatic gun he pulled the trigger again. This time a bullet hit somebody in the head. The body fell to the ground limp with blood pouring. Then Eliteslash77 shot again. Once again another body fell to the ground with blood pouring. Everybody gasped. Then started running, while the squad moved on with a distraction made. "Where to next?" asked Silversoldier13. "Up to our target of course." Lionboy9913 said. Then Eliteslash77 kicked open the door. Nobody was there. Desklamp grabbed a folder marked "TOP-SECRET" Desklamp then hid it in his bloody suit. They went up to the next floor. Then they kicked open a door. Empty. They went up to another floor. They kept going up floors till they were on the top floor. They went down a hall way. There were a whole lot of guards. Our heroes hid their guns. They walked down the hallway. One of the guards said "Hold it right there. You don't have an appointment. So leave." The men turned around and hid behind some plants. Then they pulled out there guns. Then they shot. Bullets flew through the air surrounded by the muzzle blast. The men dropped dead blood squirting out of their chest or head. The men walked down with blood on their shoes. They found clean clothes and changed in the restroom. Then they kicked open the door. "FREEZE!" Lionboy9913 yelled. The man did as they said. Before Desklamp could say anything Eliteslash77 yelled "BOMB!" He grabbed a lamp and broke the window. Everybody jumped out the window, Elfassassin91 was holding the informative and the informative was holding his laptop. They were 50 stories up. Then behind them a magnificent fireball erupted from behind them. It was a spectacular show of flames. Bits of building material was flying everywhere. Then it was just a fire on that part of the building. Now they were just falling, falling to their not promising fate...
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desklampJoin Date: 2011-01-04
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Epicness. Sheer epicness. WE ARE SO GONA WIN. |
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have any ideas for chapter four |
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desklampJoin Date: 2011-01-04
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Hum maby we had a parachute and land in a massive crowd all getting lost and looking for each other while under fire. |
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Chapter Four: Death
The men that were falling what seemed like there doom had to act quick. Then Elfassassin91 spotted a bounce house. "Lean that way" Elfassassin91 said pointing toward the bounce house. The men landed on the bounce house with a pitiful thud. Then they pulled out their 9 cm pistols. Then they went into the crowd. To distract everybody they shot a few people. Their body's fell to the ground limp. Blood was on the ground. Their shoes splashed in the blood. A metal monster stomped into the clearing. It was huge. It was about 40 feet tall. It then grabbed somebody in its jaws. It chomped them shut. Blood and gore fell from it's jaws. Then the mechanical terror threw up the bloody body in the air leaving a bloody trail. Then the body fell to the street. It split and there was a big blood stain. Then Lionboy9913 shot it in the nose. The bullet left a small pathetic dent. Then where the eyes of the monster are the team saw the shrouded men. Then the monster breathed fire. The team rolled aside as people got scorched. Then dead body's that were on fire fell to the ground unmoving. While others that were on fire were running to people not on fire trying to get help. Our heroes shot those flaming people to save the others. "Shoot the messenger. That is what the are trying to do, shoot the messenger. But translated they are trying to kill our informative." Eliteslash77 said. Then the mechanical monster's claws folded back. Then missiles were shot out. Our men started running. The missiles hit the ground. They created huge craters. Then the men were sent spiraling up into the air by the impact. Then the laptop fell out of the informative's hands and crashed. There was a small fireball. Then elfassassin 91 pushed the informative down where he crashed and blood splattered in the ground. "I got his thumb drive." Elfassassin91 said. They had flown about 50 miles. Then they landed on a big pad. They got hurt on the landing but they were alright. They walked into a enemy base. It was time for revenge... |
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Reply on this thread if you want to be in the book or if you want a group to be in it. |
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Chapter 5: Infiltration
They walked into the building ready to shoot and leave a trail of blood. They were going to leave a trail of blood, their enemy's blood or their blood? They walked into the building unaware of how many will be murdered here. The T.A.A. leaders had no emotion for their victims. Being "cold-blooded" helped get the job done. Because their job is kill when hired. But because of unperdicted unfortunate events they couldn't take any cases for the time being. They were doing what they did a long time ago to get noticed, get revenge. They were acting on stone cold revenge. They entered the building. They pulled out their 9 cm pistols. They cocked their semi-automatic guns. They walked to the lobby. Then a bunch of shrouded men pulled out some machine guns. "GET 'EM" One of them yelled. Then a spray of bullets flew through the air. The T.A.A. leaders or now known as Assassins ducked behind plant pots. Then they returned the favor by popping up and shooting. All the bullets hit their targets. Men fell dead or dying. The color in the dying men's faces drained. Then came the agonizing screams. There was blood pouring onto the floor. To silence the screaming men the Assassins shot them, ending their pitiful lives. The Assassins stopped at an elevator. It came down with some people in it. Their souls were silenced mercilessly. Our crew left them in the bloody elevator a decoration and a signature that they came. They came to the next floor. Murdered more. Blood spilled again. And again. They traveled up more floors. Every floor more bullets were shot, more blood was spilled, and more agonizing screams, and yes more murders. On the floor before the top they found Uzi's with a lot of ammo packs. They got to the top floor. They murdered nearly everybody in the building. They were leaving a bloody trail of victims. They felt no sympathy for their victims. They were acting on stone cold hearted revenge for their group. No mercy. Then they automatically shot two guards that were there. They proceeded down the corridor. They reached a large group of guards. Bullets were sprayed. Bullets hit. The large group of guards lay on the floor. Dead. Surrounded by blood. Desklamp, Eliteslash77, Silversoldier13, Elfassassin91, and Lionboy9913 were unstoppable. They reached a office door. Shot the guards guarding it. They kicked open the door to face the mastermind behind this whole sinister plot. It was a girl?! The girl had blond hair. She was pretty hot looking. She swore at the Assassins, and took a lousy shot. It was deflected easily. Well she took her pistol and jumped out the window. She landed in through the sun roof of a black limo. "You get the car and pursue her. I will get her faster." Eliteslash77 said. He jumped out the window. He took out his knife and landed on the roof. He started to carve a hole in the roof. The girl swore. "Speed this thing up!" She told the driver. Meanwhile the other Assassins had just got their car in hot pursuit of the black limo with Eliteslash77 on top of it. Eliteslash77 had finished carving the hole. Nobody knew what was going to happen next... |
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Chapter 6: Capture
Eliteslash77 then went into the black limo. There were gunshots. Then the bloody body of the driver fell out the window. Then there were screams. The mastermind was swearing again. Inside the car Eliteslash77 pulled out his knife since the girl kicked his gun out of his hand. He was trying to stop her from ramming her car into an oil refinery. Everything would go up in flame. Then Eliteslash77 grabbed the girl and jumped out of the car. The other Assassins saw that so they stopped their car. Then the black car rammed in to the oil refinery. Then the gas tanks blew. Everything burst into flame! Sparks were sent everywhere. It was like a wall of fire. Meanwhile Eliteslash77 locked in combat with the girl he rolled down the hill. Then at the bottom he took the girls colt. "Who are you working for?" Eliteslash77 shouted. "Don't make me ask twice!" Eliteslash77 said. The girl stared up at him. Then a grim smile spread across her face. Then the butt end of a shot gun hit Eliteslash77 in the back of the head. He fell to the ground unconscious. "Take him away," The girl said. The next thing he knew he was in a cell tied to a chair hand cuffed. "I hope you enjoy your stay here. It will be your last stay anywhere." The girl said. Then she and a guard left the room. Then Eliteslash77 grabbed a piece of metal under his bottom. He stuck in in the lock hole and messed around with it. Click. Ir unlocked. Then with his hands he grabbed a saw from the table. He cut the rope. Then he grabbed for a pistol on a table outside of the cage. He got it. Then he slipped back him. He then shot the lock. The lock cracked in two pieces. The reason the assassins can do this is because they were trained by the best assassins and best spys before them. He crept out. He then shot a guard. He called his friends. "Meet me at the west port." Eliteslash77 said into the phone. He then hung up. The next half an hour blood was spilled in the prison. Bullets flew. People died. The girl was running. Then Eliteslash77 reached the west port. The girl mastermind was cornered. Eliteslash77 was on one side with his gun aimed for her head. The rest of the Assassins had multiple machine guns aimed for her. "Game over girl" Eliteslash77 said. Then the girl smiled that grim smile. A shadow fell over the clearing... |
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kadeyn55Join Date: 2007-11-01
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Try Paragraphs |
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can u add me (robloxlover5678) and Morten654321? And add T-force to plz!!!! (its a group just so u know) |
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hey kadeyn55 i will put the edited version later with paragraphs. Yes robloxlover iw will try. |
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Chapter 7 will be called something like: complete war |
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edawg914Join Date: 2010-10-12
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you should have some grammar in those paragraphs cause that looks like just a bunch of words on a page. |
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JUST WAIT TILL I EDIT IT IT OK? |
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i have an idea i have an idea i get kiled than this one bug brings me back |
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CAN I PLZZZZ BE IN THE BOOKS!!!! |
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XRAYGCAJoin Date: 2008-12-20
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Why did I just post this? |
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Younger than 6 viewer descrition is advised.
Chapter 7: Complete Madness
Eliteslash77 looked up. "Oh my gosh!" he said. Then he rolled over out of the way or he would have been crushed by a heli. Desklamp heard a rumble from the heli. "Oh no. Oh no." he muttered. Just then the heli was ripped open and out jumpped a mutant dinosaur. It looked like a raptor from jurassic park with titanum alloy claws. It also had a target over it's left eye. Silver knew bullet proof amour would be useless against the claws. Then the mechanical raptor opened its jaws. Bullets flew out(presumedly made out of titanum alloy which can pierce bullet proof armour) of the raptors mouth. One struck Eliteslash77 on the shoulder. He was sent sprawling. The raptor stood and stared. It rased its arm to attack, but then bullets shot it off. Eliteslash77 knew those bullets when he saw them. M60. Then the assassins rushed in taking down the raptor with knifes and M60s and tranquilizers set with 90 cc. They wanted this animal dead. Eliteslash77 never did see the demise of the raptor. For his wound bled to much that he fell out of coincesnus. He lost coincesnous because the bullet struck him harder than all the rest. The last thing he saw was what he tought his wife's face. The last thing he thought before he went out was that it was all over. That he failed...
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Eliteslash77 suprisingly flicked his eyes open. He thought he died. "Am...I...in...heaven?" he asked slowly. "No," Lionboy9913 started, "you were struck in the arm by a sonic bullet and you were knocked out. We were lucky. We probed your wound and fixed you up and now your as good as new." "I will be in the meeting room with Desklamp and Silversoldier13 and Elfassassin91. You may join if you want." Lionboy9913 said then he walked into another room. Eliteslash77's eyes flicked around rapidly. He didn't know if his mind was playing tricks on him like when he was a child. He got up. He slowly walked as if it was his first time. When he finally made it to the meeting room he asked" Where is the the target?" Desklamp answered" She got away in all the action. We couldn't get her and take down the raptor at the same time. Sorry."
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The men stood out on a bloody field facing their foes. The men knew it was going to be bloody. They were waiting for noon to start. Lionboy9913 started counting off the seconds till noon"10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1... FIGHT" The instant Lionboy9913 said fight a rain of bullets flew. The assassin's enemys fell dead their bodys limp, and riddled with bullets blood oozing. The assassin's own troops fell. Then some helis drove in. "Take them out!" yelled desklamp. Silversoldier13 pulled out a RPG and shot down a couple of the helis. They caused damage to both sides. Then the rpg was out of ammo. The next helis split open and mechanical raptors t-rexs spinos pterosaurs leaped out. And then they attacked... |
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come on is anybody still reading this? READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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READ THESE CHAPTERS AND REPLY NOW!!!!!!!11 |
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Come on read and reply please please. It is good. |
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This scared me so I stoped reading the book after Ch.1
Too many words and paragraphes and things. I actually have jobs on here to do so sorry I didn't have time. (Try using paragraphes) |
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