KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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You wake up on a blank white ground,when getting up you notice there is no sky, land or even people,your alone in this strange place. You walk looking at the ground in hope of finging something, as you walk you imagine the grass at your feet and the trees infront of you swaying in the breeze. But when you look up, you see exactly that, you can see and feel the grass between your toes, and see the trees swaying in a small breeze, you look up to where the sky should be, but its empty. You close your eyes and then imagine the light blue sky with some clouds drifting over your head, when you open your eyes, you can see the clouds and the light blue sky staring down at you, like the way you imagined it. You look around in hopes of finding someone, but you see no one.
You begin to ask yourself if your dreaming, so you pinch yourself and you feel nothing, you now belive its a dream, so you try to wake up. You close and open your eyes continuousely, but nothing happens. You then imagine someone to talk to, and they appear before you, you go to touch them, but the vanish, and so does everything else. Again you are alone in a white void. You blink a few times and see a shape of a human in the distance, to you they look like a small ant on a polished white floor. You doubt that its a real person, and belive its you imagination taking over. You then try to think of how you got here.
(basicly you are in a comma and stuck in your own dream(or so thats what you think) you end up finding out you are sharing dreams with many other people in commas and try to find a way out)
(the dreams are controlled through emotion, they can colide and become different(ex; the sky begins to cry. ex2; as it rains the sun peers out from the clouds slowly clearing the sky once more.) so not just one person can control the dreams.)
(and yes I misspeled alot.... I will correct once i make the real RP)
(and please I want your opinion and a Tittle..... Please and thank you.) |
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EXOJoin Date: 2007-08-19
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Coma, not comma. It's O.K., considering the spelling. I think you need to add a hook, a lure to draw readers in more. Good job so far. |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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That is awesome! |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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^-^ thank you!
I'll still work on it... |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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Bump! |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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(BUMPER) |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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(BUMP) |
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EXOJoin Date: 2007-08-19
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(BUMP(off a cliff)) |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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(Bump of life!) |
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EXOJoin Date: 2007-08-19
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(Bump into a zombie wasteland) |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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ok i haven't made it yet though >_< still working on it.... kinda....
(Bump of 'I NEED HELP') |
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Can I be admin? If not I'll still join. You're creative O_O |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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I'd be willing to make a title.
Anything else you need help with? I can make a prologue. Might not be too different from yours. |
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A title could be Blankess. |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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Maybe something in Japanese? |
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空白世界 is blank world in Chinese. |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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Well, the scenery changes according to you emotions. Maybe something like "Changing World".
Not good, I know. |
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You just gave me an idea for a roleplay. Where people can control moods. Lol. |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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:P insparation to us all!!!! |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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LOL.
Ever-Changing World? |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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:/ something that will cause attention to the RP. |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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Sorry you are right. |
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KaidaHimeJoin Date: 2011-10-16
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but that was a good tittle, just not right for this RP.... i think.... hmmmm |
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AbCatchemJoin Date: 2010-11-20
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Ok.
Since the world changes according to your emotions, I thought it would work. |
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