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RAT has invaded UAF's home planet in the last days of the war.
RAT has just captured the Capitol city. However, RAA has unorthodox plans to keep it out of RAT's hands....
After RAA detonates a nuclear warhead inside a city, against UAF's wishes. This kills most of the RAT and UAF combatants inside the city. After it is clear RAT has lost, what remains of the city goes right back into the hands of UAF and RAA.
However, one squad of Immortals, lead by 250 year old Ivan Naeklovich, has survived the explosion by hiding out in the UAF Legislature building's fallout shelter.
The story focuses on their struggle to escape, but more importantly, survive...
What do you think?
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Remove the "After" in sentence 3.
typo ftw
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our planet is earth.
~ shads |
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@Shadow
See, I did not know.
Thank you for pointing that out...
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Usually I'd be against a story like this, but since it's a struggle to survive, and not a story to hunt every last one of us down, sure, as long as:
1. I'm in it (derp)
2. There are some UAF soldiers in it who are wounded from the explosion, do what you will with them
3. The Nuclear Fallout is still present in the story.
If it has that, except 1, I will approve! ;3 |
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AdrocalJoin Date: 2011-11-04
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"lead by 250 year old Ivan Naeklovich"
"WE LIKE TO PRETEND HE IS STILL ALIVE"
~dont be stupid be a smarty, come and join the vakkie party |
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Adrocal, if you recall, most RAT, when they get old, get a sword cane, which 'apparently' makes them immortal. |
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@Adrocal
Frostarian Health care + Experimental nano-aging= ya
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@killercrovette
+Sword Cane. Add that to the equation! |
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AdrocalJoin Date: 2011-11-04
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gl getting past the grox
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@evil
I hate stories like that too. I prefer stories with more meaning than just "KIL KIL KIL!1"...
The wounded UAF may not make a big appearance, as UAF took back the city. But I will include an encounter with some...
Nuclear fallout is big in the story.
Be sure to track this thread, as I will post the story threads IF I decide to create them!
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AdrocalJoin Date: 2011-11-04
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needs more vak
~dont be stupid be a smarty, come and join the vakkie party |
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@Adro
I tried to create a RAT-VAK story similar to this during our war.
It did not turn out too good...
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AdrocalJoin Date: 2011-11-04
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vak
~dont be stupid be a smarty, come and join the vakkie party |
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Writing the introduction now.
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XNoBoomXJoin Date: 2011-05-08
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RAT's home planet is Frostaria, right?
~Fo Dah' Wimminz!~ |
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squidboi2Join Date: 2009-04-25
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SOUNDS KINDA LIKE KILLZONE.
BECAUSE IT IS KILLZONE. |
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@XNBX
Yes.
@Squid
If it is any consolation, I have never played Killzone. I do not even own a Sony gaming system...
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squidboi2Join Date: 2009-04-25
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A LIKELY STORY. |
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@Squid
IKR?
Sony sucks. They wish they could be Microsoft...
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squidboi2Join Date: 2009-04-25
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I HAVE BOTH AN XBOX360, AND A PS3.
LOOK AT THE ENDING OF KILLZONE 2/INTRO TO KILLZONE 3 AND TELL ME IT ISN'T CLOSE TO THE SAME. |
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AegirineJoin Date: 2008-07-16
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so is VS involved in this story
is the group forced to call on a small group of VS soldiers to help them
cough cough |
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It isn't close to the same.
I have both games. And I prefer Xbox to PlayStation.
Sony sucks. Sony TVs, Sony PCs, Sony Gaming consoles...
They all suck.
RAT Conscript is meeeehhhhh.
~Telamon only likes BAKED chicken, as it is much healthier. |
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@Squid
Surprisingly, it is pretty similar.
But there are SOME key differences....
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