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#63896697Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:38 AM GMT

CHAPTER 1: The Planes It was a cold day here in Venezia. I was speeding on my bike. I was going to Alianor. I was pedaling as hard as i could. As the blurry trees and buildings past me, so did Fire Engines. Not just 1 or 2. 12. They sped past me probably at 70 or 80 MPH. I was getting nervous. They were going the same direction i was. I started pedaling harder. Sweat started to pour down my face. As i got closer to the amazing Alianor II, i started seeing smoke. Thick, Black smoke. Not any chimney smoke... This was fire smoke. I stared in awe as i got closer. I herd loud explosions. I saw more Fire Engines. I saw Privates and Officers running around with Swords. I saw people in FEAR Honors Trench Coats chasing the FEAR Privates. BOOM! The 3rd Floor of Alianors building got blown off. Then i saw a Colonel yelling orders. I couldn't tell who he was because he was wearing a thick bullet-proof helmet. "GET TO YOU'R BATTLE STATIONS NOW!" said the Colonel. "Uhh Sir? What's going on?" I replied. "AN ATTACK!! NOW GET TO YOU'RE BATTLE STATIONS!" "SIR YES SIR!" I ran as hard as i could. An explosion knocked me down to the floor. I felt pain. Lots of pain. My back was burned. As i grabbed for my Pistol on the floor, everything was quiet. Too quiet. Like a normal day guarding Alianor. The attack ended. As Police sirens and Fire Fighters sirens and Paramedics sirens wailed through the silence healing the wounded, i was on the floor. I was tired. I wanted to jump on my bed ans rest for a good 10 minutes. I got up and rushed into Alianors 3 storie building. Well... Now it's a 2 storie building... As Colonels and General were yelling orders, i went into the building. I couldn't believe my eyes.. FEAR Commander SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX was standing right in the 1st Floor. 2 Guards were next to him. One guard was General JasonIIII and the other was Colonel ImAwesomeFoo. As he stared in awe at the damage done, i ran into the 2nd Floor which was missing the roof and I just looked at the damage. VROOOM! "WHAT THE?" I yelled. Next thing i know Commander SONIC was standing next to me. "OPEN FIRE!" His voice boomed across the room. I started firing everywhere although no enemies were seen. After waiting a good 2 and a half minutes.. BOOM! BOOM!! BBOOOOOOOMMMM!!! The building shook. I looked up and i saw planes. But something was different about these planes. Not Enemy planes. Vortex Security war planes. CHAPTER 2: Death Me and SONIC were running. The planes dropping Huge bombs everywhere. Palm trees almost fell on SONIC and I. Hundreds of Privates and Corporals running around with guns. Some new Privates stopped and asked SONIC for his autograph. More explosions. The 2nd Floor of the building was blown up by a missile. We were running with some M16's trying to shoot down every plane we saw. My back was still hurt by the explosion. Colonel Cherrybomb117 came up to us with a FEAR Jeep and gave us a ride to the entrence to shoot down incoming planes. "Hop on!" Cherry said. BOOM! "HOLY C0WZ!" A new Private yelled. "OPEN FIRE MEN!!!" Yelled Commander SONICTHEGEDGEHOGXX. "SIR YES SIR!" I responded. I broke the window with the back of my M16 and started shooting up in the sky. Next thing i know i see a plane crashing behind us. "GOT ONE SIR!" I said. "KEEP SHOOTING OFFICER!" SONIC replied. BBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!! I heard a loud explosion. Everything became silent. I felt like i was dead for a minute. Then i felt weightless. I couldn't see anything. Everything was white. I only saw white. I couldn't hear anything. CRASH! I wake up. I was on the floor. The jeep was on fire and Colonel Cherrybomb117 was wounded. Commander SONIC landed next to me. He was unconscious. "Sir?" I say. No response. "SIR?" I yell. Colonel nighthawk698 came up to us. "What happened to SONIC? What's you're rank?!" nighthawk said. "Ugh.. Officer sir! Commander SONIC is passed out sir!" I replied. "Get him awake! I gotta shoot down some planes." He said. BOOM! Corporal RebeccaLynnFifield came up and tried to help. ":( Sir, i think hes... Gone..." She says. "Can't be!" I reply. ":/ Sorry..." She says. "GET BACK TO FIGHTING CPL!" ImAwesomeFoo yells. "YES SIR!" Rebecca replies" "Oh no... Can't be true..." I whisper to myself. No response again. I started to panic. I thought he died. I started to form tears. Then after 2 minutes... "HUH? WHAT? WHERE? WHO? WHEN? WHY?" SONIC said. Officer Wizard2268 runs toward in a relieved face. "Sir you're alive! Oh i was watching from over there and i thought you died!" He said. "Better get back to fighting!" He said. He ran off. "SIR!!! You're alive!! Oh god i thought you died!!"I said. "STOP TALKING AND FIGHT BOY!" He yelled. "YES SIR! WHAT ABOUT CHERRY SIR?" "Holy mother of Telamon..." He said as he stared at Cherry and his wounded leg. Officer newshea came over to help. "Sir, maybe i can help! I was a doctor!" He said. "Alright, me and SONIC will go now."I replied. "Okay!" Newshea replied. Me and SONIC ran towards the entrance of Alianor. BOOOMM! Another explosion. This time, I couldn't hear anything. I couldn't see anything. I couldn't feel anything. I couldn't smell anything. I couldn't taste anything. I must be dead. CHAPTER 3: Heaven "Ugghh, What's going on?" "Hello?!" "Anybody here?" Everything is white. Not a single soul is in sight. I was in a white place. No noise. No sounds. No smell. Not humid. Not dry. Not hot. Not cold. It was perfect. But... I was alone. Like I said, no soul is in sight. Everything was white. It's like i was trapped in a big, white box. "HELLO?!?!" "ANYBODY HERE??" I got up and decided to wonder around. I looked behind me. Nothing. Then i turn my head back around. Commander SONIC was there. "Whoa! Were did you come from?"I said. "I don't know. Are we..... Dead?"Replied SONIC. "I don't know sir.." "Hey, lun. What rank are you?" "Officer sir." "Hm.. You know how we got knocked out?" "No sir." "Lets split up and look around. I'll meet you back here in 2 hours." "Okay si- wait.. We don't have watches..." "Okay just meet me here." SONIC took out a black sharpie and wrote a big X were we were standing to mark our place. The sharpie was brand new. I could tell because the ink was dark and black like a new marker. "Okay split up, meet you here later. Okay lun?" "Okay SONIC." Splitting up was the worst thing i did. After he took 1 step, he disappeared. I just kept walking hoping we would bumb into each other. I decided to turn and look for him. When I turned, I lost the direction I was going. I started to walk in a random direction. I was lost. I had no idea were I was walking. My G.P.S was malfunctioning. I didn't remember anything. All i know that me and SONIC are both doing the same outside this strange dream thing because we are both here. He is probably lost too. "HELLO?!?!?! SONIC?!?!" No response. I must have walked a lot because I cannot hear anything. I decided to start looking for the big X SONIC drew with his brand new sharpie. After walking, and walking, and walking. I thought it had been 2 hours because I was tired. I was exhausted. Then. I sat down. The floor was cold. It was like sitting in a big refrigerator. Only that I was on top since it was not hot neither cold. After waiting a while. I heard a voice. "Hello luniso." "Uhh... Hello? Who are you? How do you know my name?" I was starting to get nervous. "I know you but you don't know me." "SONIC? Fireflame09225? Are you guys tricking me?" "This is not one of you're friends luniso." "I am God." "You are in Heaven." CHAPTER 4: Alive. "I died?!?!" I exclaimed. "Yes luniso." God replied. "What?!?! But.. D:" "Luniso, you died because of a bomb. Dropped by an allie. You're allie Vortex Security is betraying you." ":O UMG!" "Listen Luniso. I will teleport SONIC to you." "Thank you God." "Teleport/SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX/Luniso" "LUNISO?!?! I WAS LOOKING FOR YOU BRO!!" SONIC yelled. "Hi SONIC, I got lost too!" "SILENCE" God exclaimed. "I will send you back to Earth because you too served for you're clan and are brave." I felt happy. I wanted to jump out of a window and yell "I'M ALIVE!"! SNAP! Me and SONIC woke up in the place we died. We were burned. Captain doono, Officer mariopoi, Officer shadowlite56 were there pouring water on our faces. "UMG U GUYS R ALIVE!! OYUS!!!" Exclaimed mariopoi. "Oh thank god you guys are Okay." Doono said. "Oh my god. I was getting worried! phew!" exclaimed shadowlite56. "S0NIC, i g3t promo cuz i saved ur life right? cuz i r epic 2!" mariopoi said. Later that day i prayed and said thank you god. RING RING!! "Hello?"I asked. "Lun, it's SONIC. I want to ask you to come to FEARMeeting tomorrow." ":D Okay sir." "Come to FEARMeeting." "Yes sir." "Come first thing at the morning at 6 AM." *SONIC Hangs up* That was a good night sleep I had. Although the pain in my back still hurt. That night i had a dream. I had my whole life flashing through my eyes. I remembered when I was a baby, all my birthdays. I had experienced how it feels like right before dying. Although I didn't die after. Although it was scary. Especially when i remembered when i was in Heaven, and when Vortex Security attacked us. Oh those backstabbing betrayers. I am so mad at them. They're Leader will probably be at FEARMeeting tomorrow. For now, i will take a well-deserved rest. AT DAWN... *Yawn* That was the best sleep I have gotten in AGES. Oh my llamas i have never gotten such a well-deserved rest in my life. I am ready for another attack. As i was getting ready, i noticed that i had my Old FEAR Uniform. Since the FEARMeeting was that day, i decided to put it on. VROOOM! "Oh god not again." I went for my M16. But when I looked out the windows, they were FEAR planes. So i put my M16 back. After i got ready it was 5:57 AM. I was going to be late for FEARMeeting. I was rushing. I was speeding on my bike. Sweat going down my face. All the moisture building up on me. I was speeding. I was pedaling as hard as I could. This could be one of the most important days of my life. After i got to Alianor, I parked as fast as i could. I was running into the secret door. I was running through the halls. I was starting to get nervous because Camera were watching me. "I'M HERE SIR!" I got to FEARMeeting at 5:59. "Very well let's begin." SONIC said. I sat down very fast. I looked around. JasonIIII was there, BrianK2355, and SHADOWTHEHEDGEHOGXX, and VS's Leader. I sat next to JasonIIII. "I declare war on this group." VS's Leader says. "Very well."SONIC said. "Vortex Security and FEAR are now in war." SONIC and VS's Leader said at the same time. CHAPTER 5: FEAR Harbor RING RING! "Hello?" I answered. "Hey lun, it's SONIC again." He said. He sounded nervous. "I need you to gather up some men and go to FEAR harbor" "Why sir?" "Go. And bring weapons." "Yes sir." SONIC hanged up. I was wondering why he wanted me to go to the FEAR Harbor. 'It must be important.' I thought. I decided to kick it up the speed. Now i was pedaling harder. I was going at 26 or 30 MPH. I couldn't tell. I was watching the blurry trees and buildings and people passing by. I could tell I was going fast. Sweat started running down my face and dripping off my chin. Then it flew way back because of the speed. I wasn't rushing to the FEAR Harbor. It was a sunny day. Was in the mid-60's and low 70's. Normal temperature in the winter. I couldn't stop remembering when I was in Heaven. 20 MINUTES LATER... I parked at the FEAR Harbor. It was now 7:04 AM. Early. I watched as Officers and Sergeants were coming out. General JOHNSTER98 was coming out of the FEAR Venenzia Battle Ship with some guards. One guard was Colonel subarurallyteamusa and the other one was wintersfury. "Hey, what you doing here Officer? I haven't seen you around." JOHNSTER98 said. "Hello General, Sir. SONIC called me and told me to come with some men and help out." I replied. "SONIC? SONIC doesn't talk to Officers!" JOHNSTER98 annoyingly said. "Sir, call him and find out." I angrily replied. After that, I left. He yelled at me for being rude but I didn't care. He doesn't believe a Loyal Officer than that's HIS problem. I was mad. After that I gathered up some men. With the help of Colonel Cherrybomb117. "They're all yours bro." He said. "Thanks Sir, you gonna be Okay? You're leg is still wounded." I nervously replied. "Yea don't worry about it." He said. Then he walked away. I was walking toward the FEAR SONIC Battle Ship. Colonel rolliply came running towards me. "OFFICER!! COME COME!!" He yelled. I ran towards him. He had a confused and a surprised face. That couldn't be good.. "LOOK!" He said as he pointed to a Radar Screen. I looked. I couldn't believe my eyes.. "Oh... My... Llamas..." I said. "What do you think it means?" He questioned. "Uhh..." I was looking at hundreds of red plane dots flying toward the Harbor. CHAPTER 6: The Harbor Attack "Holy Llamas..." I said. "Rolli, Sir, I can tell you one thing." I waited. "Sound the alarms." WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO "WAKE UP! WAKE UP! ENEMY PLANES INCOMING!" Me and rolli yelled. "lolwut? its only 8 oclock in da morning bro. kthxbai." mariopoi said. I was watching as 4000 Privates woke up and got they're weapons. 2000 CPL's woke up and got they're guns. 4400 Sergeants-Captains woke up. 20 Officers got up and started yelling orders. 4 Colonels woke up. 3 General woke up. "Alright, whats going on?" said subarurallyteamusa "Sir, hundreds of enemy planes are coming." I said. "Right in the direction of our Harbor." "That doesn't sound good. We should probably tell SONIC about this..." "Yes sir." I said. I dialed SONIC's Phone number. RING RING "This is SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX How may i help you?" "Hello sir, it's me Lun." "Ahh.. Luniso? Are you at the Harbor?" "Yes sir, and we need you to come." "I'll be on my way." I hanged up. VROOM!! VRROOOOOOOM!!!! "LUNISO!!! THE PLANES!!! ARE HERE!!!!" said subarurallyteamusa. "TAKE COVER!!!!" I yell. BOOMMM! "HOLY MOLY!!" I yell. VROOOOMMMM!! BOOOOOOOMMMMMM! Bullets everywhere. The FEAR Venezia Battle Ship was on fire. The FEAR SONIC Aircraft Carrier was sinking. The Vortex Security Planes dropping torpedoes. The FEAR Captain's Battle Ship was got hit by 8 torpedoes and was tipping over. "OPEN FIRE!!! FIRE!!!!" yelled subarurallyteamusa. Hundreds and Thousands of bullets in the air. I got hit in the arm, but i kept fighting. Some planes had paratroopers! They jumped from they're planes and attack on land! "OH MY LLAMAS!" I said as i shot a paratrooper. VROOOMM!! BOOM!!!! VROM! BOOOMMMM! Planes were dropping bombs, Missiles, Torpedoes, Paratroopers! It was a nightmare! Everywhere I looked people were getting shot! I was running as hard as I could. Sweat was running down my face. My face was burned and dirty. I caught a glimpse of a VS member aiming at subarurallyteamusa. "SUB WATCH OUT!!" I yelled. I tried to tackle him down so the member would miss. When i jumped, i was weightless. Time had slowed down. I could see the bullet going toward him as i was in the middle of the air going to tackle him. "I'M GONNA MAKE IT!" I happily said. As i was 2 inches away in mid-air. I saw the most incredible thing. As i was just about to save his life. The 2-Inch bullet entered his stomach and he fell down. As i fell onto the floor too. Time was back to normal. BOOMM! And explosion knocked me over. My face was burned. I could barely see. Laying down on the Harbor, i was scared. I was sad. I wanted to die. I didn't move at all. But i had to do what i had to do. I stand up, i grabbed my M16, and i charged at the enemy plane. Shooting it hoping it would sink, they shot back. They shot one of my favorite friends. Subarurallyteamusa. I wanted to just die. I wanted to drop on my knees and scream WHYYY?!?!?!? I wanted to kill VS. I clenched my fist as a tear went down my burned, dirty face. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" I angrily yelled. I charged at the person who shot him. I grabbed his hand and shot it. I grabbed his neck, pinned him down to the dirt. "YOU COST THE LIFE OF MY FRIEND! AND NOW, YOU SHALL PAY." After that, I shot him right on the head. I ran over to subarurallyteamusa. "WHY?!?! WHY!??!?!!? CAN YOU HEAR ME?" I said as more tears went down. I almost lost hope. "I... Lun..." He managed to say. "I.. want you to.. Know... That... You were a great friend.." He said. "STAY WITH ME. YOU'RE GOING TO BE OKAY!" I yelled. "Paramedic.." He whispered. I start seeing a paramedic running towards me. "SUB, STAY WITH ME BRO. HES COMING!" "I..." He whispered. Blood was all over his shirt. As he tried to move and stand up, his wound got bigger. "SUB DON'T MOVE YOU'RE GOING TO... BE... OKAY!" I managed to say as a 1-Inch bullet entered my back and came out my side. "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" I wailed in pain. We were both laying there. And as I start looking, I realize.. that... This is real life. Not some video game where you re-spawn and everything is Okay. I realized that if no help came, I would lay here. Dead. Next thing I know, subarurallyteamusa is sleeping... I hoped... And i was falling into a deep sleep... 2 HOURS LATER I woke up. I was painfully and mentally scarred. I was dehydrated. I was tired. I was hurt. I had a 2x2 Inch wound on m back cause by a plane bullet. I couldn't stand up. "HELP!" I whispered. A Paramedic came over and helped. Me and subarurallyteamusa started forming a crowd. "Are they gonna be okay?" said Neowolf543. "I don't know... Hopefully." the paramedic responded. "umg nou." said maripoi. "I hope they're okay..." said Shadowlite56. 1 HOUR LATER I could stand up. I woke up in the Hospital. I had stitches and bandages on my wound. I wanted to know what happened to subarurallyteamusa. "Hey, what happened to subarurallyteamusa?" I asked. "Oh they took him into the FEAR Venezia Battle Ship. They repaired it."Fireofflames95 replied. "Oh good." I said. ON THE FEAR VENEZIA BATTLE SHIP... WEO WEO WEO WEO "SIR WE HAVE BEEN HIT BY A TORPEDO!" A Private said. "Oh no.. What will we do with our wounded passenger?" Commander SONIC replied. CHAPTER 7: USS FEAR Venezia Battle Ship SWOOSH!! SWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHH!!!! BOOOOOMMMMM! The boat was roaring. Massive waves hitting the decks. HR's screaming orders. It was all too horrifying. The boat was rocking. You can hear the water rushing into the boats 2 wide holes. The boat was starting to tip over. Corporal RebeccaLynnFifield was running to the code room. tick tick tock tick tick tick tick She was typing a message. A message to nearby ships. As I listened carefully I could decode it. 'S.O.S, S.O.S, S.O.S'. We were in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. The boat was tilting over. The water was starting to get in through the crack on the bottom of the door. "NURSE!" I yelled. "Yes Officer luniso?" She replied. "LOOK AT THE WATER!" I exclaimed. She looked and then gasped. She fainted. I could hear RebeccaLynnFifield whisper "S...O....S.....S...O...S...". She was being careful. As if this was a life or death decision. It was. I started thinking about subarurallyteamusa. He is like a brother to me. I started testing my leg to see if i could walk. I could. Although it hurt a little. I started limping across the room. I slammed the door open. More water started coming in. I saw subarurallyteamusa. "DUDE, OVER HERE!" I yelled as I noticed he could walk perfectly fine. "Wasn't you're leg hurt?" I questioned. "Yea but it was only a muscle that broke in half." He replied. "I broke my leg. :(" I said. "Less talking more walking!" He said. We ran to the decks. The boat was starting to tip over. As we hang on for our lives, we hear planes. At first I thought they were enemy planes. But when I looked, they had the FEAR Logo. They turned around and next thing we know, the USS FEAR SONIC Battle Ship was speeding towards the sinking USS FEAR Venezia Battle Ship. I saw Privates running around dropping Anchors and dropping the Life Boats. One Private waved at me. I looked closer and realized it was Private StarForces!The boat was now on it's side. And it was turning. As the Life Boats were letting us crawl on, I wondered were Commander SONIC was. And as always, he was getting out. When subarurallyteamusa and I were off the ship, we went to the Break Room to enjoy a well deserved rest. 3 HOURS LATER... We hit land. We had gotten back to Venezia. After we boarded off, we headed to Alianor. 2 HOURS LATER... At Alianor, we got prepared for battle as SONIC told us over the intercom that off the coast he saw VS getting Aircraft Carriers ready loaded with hundreds of planes. Officer arty427 was rushing. "Sir, were should I put these guns?" He asked subarurallyteamusa. "Just put em' were everyone could see em'." Sub replied. "ATTENTION ALL FEAR MEMBERS, LOAD YOU WEAPONS, I SEE THE PLANES TAKING OFF WITH BOMBS." SONIC said over the Alianor Intercom. VROOMMM!!! A plane flew by. Seconds later, I heard a loud BOOM!!! I rushed into the newly repaired building of Alianor and saw SONIC. "Lun, i want you to be the commander of the FEAR Epic Squad." He said. "Where are th-" I was but was interrupted bu the sight of a group of 5 people walking towards me. When I looked at them, time slowed down. Those 5 people were: CHAPTER 1: The Planes It was a cold day here in Venezia. I was speeding on my bike. I was going to Alianor. I was pedaling as hard as i could. As the blurry trees and buildings past me, so did Fire Engines. Not just 1 or 2. 12. They sped past me probably at 70 or 80 MPH. I was getting nervous. They were going the same direction i was. I started pedaling harder. Sweat started to pour down my face. As i got closer to the amazing Alianor II, i started seeing smoke. Thick, Black smoke. Not any chimney smoke... This was fire smoke. I stared in awe as i got closer. I herd loud explosions. I saw more Fire Engines. I saw Privates and Officers running around with Swords. I saw people in FEAR Honors Trench Coats chasing the FEAR Privates. BOOM! The 3rd Floor of Alianors building got blown off. Then i saw a Colonel yelling orders. I couldn't tell who he was because he was wearing a thick bullet-proof helmet. "GET TO YOU'R BATTLE STATIONS NOW!" said the Colonel. "Uhh Sir? What's going on?" I replied. "AN ATTACK!! NOW GET TO YOU'RE BATTLE STATIONS!" "SIR YES SIR!" I ran as hard as i could. An explosion knocked me down to the floor. I felt pain. Lots of pain. My back was burned. As i grabbed for my Pistol on the floor, everything was quiet. Too quiet. Like a normal day guarding Alianor. The attack ended. As Police sirens and Fire Fighters sirens and Paramedics sirens wailed through the silence healing the wounded, i was on the floor. I was tired. I wanted to jump on my bed ans rest for a good 10 minutes. I got up and rushed into Alianors 3 storie building. Well... Now it's a 2 storie building... As Colonels and General were yelling orders, i went into the building. I couldn't believe my eyes.. FEAR Commander SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX was standing right in the 1st Floor. 2 Guards were next to him. One guard was General JasonIIII and the other was Colonel ImAwesomeFoo. As he stared in awe at the damage done, i ran into the 2nd Floor which was missing the roof and I just looked at the damage. VROOOM! "WHAT THE?" I yelled. Next thing i know Commander SONIC was standing next to me. "OPEN FIRE!" His voice boomed across the room. I started firing everywhere although no enemies were seen. After waiting a good 2 and a half minutes.. BOOM! BOOM!! BBOOOOOOOMMMM!!! The building shook. I looked up and i saw planes. But something was different about these planes. Not Enemy planes. Vortex Security war planes. CHAPTER 2: Death Me and SONIC were running. The planes dropping Huge bombs everywhere. Palm trees almost fell on SONIC and I. Hundreds of Privates and Corporals running around with guns. Some new Privates stopped and asked SONIC for his autograph. More explosions. The 2nd Floor of the building was blown up by a missile. We were running with some M16's trying to shoot down every plane we saw. My back was still hurt by the explosion. Colonel Cherrybomb117 came up to us with a FEAR Jeep and gave us a ride to the entrence to shoot down incoming planes. "Hop on!" Cherry said. BOOM! "HOLY C0WZ!" A new Private yelled. "OPEN FIRE MEN!!!" Yelled Commander SONICTHEGEDGEHOGXX. "SIR YES SIR!" I responded. I broke the window with the back of my M16 and started shooting up in the sky. Next thing i know i see a plane crashing behind us. "GOT ONE SIR!" I said. "KEEP SHOOTING OFFICER!" SONIC replied. BBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!! I heard a loud explosion. Everything became silent. I felt like i was dead for a minute. Then i felt weightless. I couldn't see anything. Everything was white. I only saw white. I couldn't hear anything. CRASH! I wake up. I was on the floor. The jeep was on fire and Colonel Cherrybomb117 was wounded. Commander SONIC landed next to me. He was unconscious. "Sir?" I say. No response. "SIR?" I yell. Colonel nighthawk698 came up to us. "What happened to SONIC? What's you're rank?!" nighthawk said. "Ugh.. Officer sir! Commander SONIC is passed out sir!" I replied. "Get him awake! I gotta shoot down some planes." He said. BOOM! Corporal RebeccaLynnFifield came up and tried to help. ":( Sir, i think hes... Gone..." She says. "Can't be!" I reply. ":/ Sorry..." She says. "GET BACK TO FIGHTING CPL!" ImAwesomeFoo yells. "YES SIR!" Rebecca replies" "Oh no... Can't be true..." I whisper to myself. No response again. I started to panic. I thought he died. I started to form tears. Then after 2 minutes... "HUH? WHAT? WHERE? WHO? WHEN? WHY?" SONIC said. Officer Wizard2268 runs toward in a relieved face. "Sir you're alive! Oh i was watching from over there and i thought you died!" He said. "Better get back to fighting!" He said. He ran off. "SIR!!! You're alive!! Oh god i thought you died!!"I said. "STOP TALKING AND FIGHT BOY!" He yelled. "YES SIR! WHAT ABOUT CHERRY SIR?" "Holy mother of Telamon..." He said as he stared at Cherry and his wounded leg. Officer newshea came over to help. "Sir, maybe i can help! I was a doctor!" He said. "Alright, me and SONIC will go now."I replied. "Okay!" Newshea replied. Me and SONIC ran towards the entrance of Alianor. BOOOMM! Another explosion. This time, I couldn't hear anything. I couldn't see anything. I couldn't feel anything. I couldn't smell anything. I couldn't taste anything. I must be dead. CHAPTER 3: Heaven "Ugghh, What's going on?" "Hello?!" "Anybody here?" Everything is white. Not a single soul is in sight. I was in a white place. No noise. No sounds. No smell. Not humid. Not dry. Not hot. Not cold. It was perfect. But... I was alone. Like I said, no soul is in sight. Everything was white. It's like i was trapped in a big, white box. "HELLO?!?!" "ANYBODY HERE??" I got up and decided to wonder around. I looked behind me. Nothing. Then i turn my head back around. Commander SONIC was there. "Whoa! Were did you come from?"I said. "I don't know. Are we..... Dead?"Replied SONIC. "I don't know sir.." "Hey, lun. What rank are you?" "Officer sir." "Hm.. You know how we got knocked out?" "No sir." "Lets split up and look around. I'll meet you back here in 2 hours." "Okay si- wait.. We don't have watches..." "Okay just meet me here." SONIC took out a black sharpie and wrote a big X were we were standing to mark our place. The sharpie was brand new. I could tell because the ink was dark and black like a new marker. "Okay split up, meet you here later. Okay lun?" "Okay SONIC." Splitting up was the worst thing i did. After he took 1 step, he disappeared. I just kept walking hoping we would bumb into each other. I decided to turn and look for him. When I turned, I lost the direction I was going. I started to walk in a random direction. I was lost. I had no idea were I was walking. My G.P.S was malfunctioning. I didn't remember anything. All i know that me and SONIC are both doing the same outside this strange dream thing because we are both here. He is probably lost too. "HELLO?!?!?! SONIC?!?!" No response. I must have walked a lot because I cannot hear anything. I decided to start looking for the big X SONIC drew with his brand new sharpie. After walking, and walking, and walking. I thought it had been 2 hours because I was tired. I was exhausted. Then. I sat down. The floor was cold. It was like sitting in a big refrigerator. Only that I was on top since it was not hot neither cold. After waiting a while. I heard a voice. "Hello luniso." "Uhh... Hello? Who are you? How do you know my name?" I was starting to get nervous. "I know you but you don't know me." "SONIC? Fireflame09225? Are you guys tricking me?" "This is not one of you're friends luniso." "I am God." "You are in Heaven." CHAPTER 4: Alive. "I died?!?!" I exclaimed. "Yes luniso." God replied. "What?!?! But.. D:" "Luniso, you died because of a bomb. Dropped by an allie. You're allie Vortex Security is betraying you." ":O UMG!" "Listen Luniso. I will teleport SONIC to you." "Thank you God." "Teleport/SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX/Luniso" "LUNISO?!?! I WAS LOOKING FOR YOU BRO!!" SONIC yelled. "Hi SONIC, I got lost too!" "SILENCE" God exclaimed. "I will send you back to Earth because you too served for you're clan and are brave." I felt happy. I wanted to jump out of a window and yell "I'M ALIVE!"! SNAP! Me and SONIC woke up in the place we died. We were burned. Captain doono, Officer mariopoi, Officer shadowlite56 were there pouring water on our faces. "UMG U GUYS R ALIVE!! OYUS!!!" Exclaimed mariopoi. "Oh thank god you guys are Okay." Doono said. "Oh my god. I was getting worried! phew!" exclaimed shadowlite56. "S0NIC, i g3t promo cuz i saved ur life right? cuz i r epic 2!" mariopoi said. Later that day i prayed and said thank you god. RING RING!! "Hello?"I asked. "Lun, it's SONIC. I want to ask you to come to FEARMeeting tomorrow." ":D Okay sir." "Come to FEARMeeting." "Yes sir." "Come first thing at the morning at 6 AM." *SONIC Hangs up* That was a good night sleep I had. Although the pain in my back still hurt. That night i had a dream. I had my whole life flashing through my eyes. I remembered when I was a baby, all my birthdays. I had experienced how it feels like right before dying. Although I didn't die after. Although it was scary. Especially when i remembered when i was in Heaven, and when Vortex Security attacked us. Oh those backstabbing betrayers. I am so mad at them. They're Leader will probably be at FEARMeeting tomorrow. For now, i will take a well-deserved rest. AT DAWN... *Yawn* That was the best sleep I have gotten in AGES. Oh my llamas i have never gotten such a well-deserved rest in my life. I am ready for another attack. As i was getting ready, i noticed that i had my Old FEAR Uniform. Since the FEARMeeting was that day, i decided to put it on. VROOOM! "Oh god not again." I went for my M16. But when I looked out the windows, they were FEAR planes. So i put my M16 back. After i got ready it was 5:57 AM. I was going to be late for FEARMeeting. I was rushing. I was speeding on my bike. Sweat going down my face. All the moisture building up on me. I was speeding. I was pedaling as hard as I could. This could be one of the most important days of my life. After i got to Alianor, I parked as fast as i could. I was running into the secret door. I was running through the halls. I was starting to get nervous because Camera were watching me. "I'M HERE SIR!" I got to FEARMeeting at 5:59. "Very well let's begin." SONIC said. I sat down very fast. I looked around. JasonIIII was there, BrianK2355, and SHADOWTHEHEDGEHOGXX, and VS's Leader. I sat next to JasonIIII. "I declare war on this group." VS's Leader says. "Very well."SONIC said. "Vortex Security and FEAR are now in war." SONIC and VS's Leader said at the same time. CHAPTER 5: FEAR Harbor RING RING! "Hello?" I answered. "Hey lun, it's SONIC again." He said. He sounded nervous. "I need you to gather up some men and go to FEAR harbor" "Why sir?" "Go. And bring weapons." "Yes sir." SONIC hanged up. I was wondering why he wanted me to go to the FEAR Harbor. 'It must be important.' I thought. I decided to kick it up the speed. Now i was pedaling harder. I was going at 26 or 30 MPH. I couldn't tell. I was watching the blurry trees and buildings and people passing by. I could tell I was going fast. Sweat started running down my face and dripping off my chin. Then it flew way back because of the speed. I wasn't rushing to the FEAR Harbor. It was a sunny day. Was in the mid-60's and low 70's. Normal temperature in the winter. I couldn't stop remembering when I was in Heaven. 20 MINUTES LATER... I parked at the FEAR Harbor. It was now 7:04 AM. Early. I watched as Officers and Sergeants were coming out. General JOHNSTER98 was coming out of the FEAR Venenzia Battle Ship with some guards. One guard was Colonel subarurallyteamusa and the other one was wintersfury. "Hey, what you doing here Officer? I haven't seen you around." JOHNSTER98 said. "Hello General, Sir. SONIC called me and told me to come with some men and help out." I replied. "SONIC? SONIC doesn't talk to Officers!" JOHNSTER98 annoyingly said. "Sir, call him and find out." I angrily replied. After that, I left. He yelled at me for being rude but I didn't care. He doesn't believe a Loyal Officer than that's HIS problem. I was mad. After that I gathered up some men. With the help of Colonel Cherrybomb117. "They're all yours bro." He said. "Thanks Sir, you gonna be Okay? You're leg is still wounded." I nervously replied. "Yea don't worry about it." He said. Then he walked away. I was walking toward the FEAR SONIC Battle Ship. Colonel rolliply came running towards me. "OFFICER!! COME COME!!" He yelled. I ran towards him. He had a confused and a surprised face. That couldn't be good.. "LOOK!" He said as he pointed to a Radar Screen. I looked. I couldn't believe my eyes.. "Oh... My... Llamas..." I said. "What do you think it means?" He questioned. "Uhh..." I was looking at hundreds of red plane dots flying toward the Harbor. CHAPTER 6: The Harbor Attack "Holy Llamas..." I said. "Rolli, Sir, I can tell you one thing." I waited. "Sound the alarms." WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO WEO "WAKE UP! WAKE UP! ENEMY PLANES INCOMING!" Me and rolli yelled. "lolwut? its only 8 oclock in da morning bro. kthxbai." mariopoi said. I was watching as 4000 Privates woke up and got they're weapons. 2000 CPL's woke up and got they're guns. 4400 Sergeants-Captains woke up. 20 Officers got up and started yelling orders. 4 Colonels woke up. 3 General woke up. "Alright, whats going on?" said subarurallyteamusa "Sir, hundreds of enemy planes are coming." I said. "Right in the direction of our Harbor." "That doesn't sound good. We should probably tell SONIC about this..." "Yes sir." I said. I dialed SONIC's Phone number. RING RING "This is SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX How may i help you?" "Hello sir, it's me Lun." "Ahh.. Luniso? Are you at the Harbor?" "Yes sir, and we need you to come." "I'll be on my way." I hanged up. VROOM!! VRROOOOOOOM!!!! "LUNISO!!! THE PLANES!!! ARE HERE!!!!" said subarurallyteamusa. "TAKE COVER!!!!" I yell. BOOMMM! "HOLY MOLY!!" I yell. VROOOOMMMM!! BOOOOOOOMMMMMM! Bullets everywhere. The FEAR Venezia Battle Ship was on fire. The FEAR SONIC Aircraft Carrier was sinking. The Vortex Security Planes dropping torpedoes. The FEAR Captain's Battle Ship was got hit by 8 torpedoes and was tipping over. "OPEN FIRE!!! FIRE!!!!" yelled subarurallyteamusa. Hundreds and Thousands of bullets in the air. I got hit in the arm, but i kept fighting. Some planes had paratroopers! They jumped from they're planes and attack on land! "OH MY LLAMAS!" I said as i shot a paratrooper. VROOOMM!! BOOM!!!! VROM! BOOOMMMM! Planes were dropping bombs, Missiles, Torpedoes, Paratroopers! It was a nightmare! Everywhere I looked people were getting shot! I was running as hard as I could. Sweat was running down my face. My face was burned and dirty. I caught a glimpse of a VS member aiming at subarurallyteamusa. "SUB WATCH OUT!!" I yelled. I tried to tackle him down so the member would miss. When i jumped, i was weightless. Time had slowed down. I could see the bullet going toward him as i was in the middle of the air going to tackle him. "I'M GONNA MAKE IT!" I happily said. As i was 2 inches away in mid-air. I saw the most incredible thing. As i was just about to save his life. The 2-Inch bullet entered his stomach and he fell down. As i fell onto the floor too. Time was back to normal. BOOMM! And explosion knocked me over. My face was burned. I could barely see. Laying down on the Harbor, i was scared. I was sad. I wanted to die. I didn't move at all. But i had to do what i had to do. I stand up, i grabbed my M16, and i charged at the enemy plane. Shooting it hoping it would sink, they shot back. They shot one of my favorite friends. Subarurallyteamusa. I wanted to just die. I wanted to drop on my knees and scream WHYYY?!?!?!? I wanted to kill VS. I clenched my fist as a tear went down my burned, dirty face. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" I angrily yelled. I charged at the person who shot him. I grabbed his hand and shot it. I grabbed his neck, pinned him down to the dirt. "YOU COST THE LIFE OF MY FRIEND! AND NOW, YOU SHALL PAY." After that, I shot him right on the head. I ran over to subarurallyteamusa. "WHY?!?! WHY!??!?!!? CAN YOU HEAR ME?" I said as more tears went down. I almost lost hope. "I... Lun..." He managed to say. "I.. want you to.. Know... That... You were a great friend.." He said. "STAY WITH ME. YOU'RE GOING TO BE OKAY!" I yelled. "Paramedic.." He whispered. I start seeing a paramedic running towards me. "SUB, STAY WITH ME BRO. HES COMING!" "I..." He whispered. Blood was all over his shirt. As he tried to move and stand up, his wound got bigger. "SUB DON'T MOVE YOU'RE GOING TO... BE... OKAY!" I managed to say as a 1-Inch bullet entered my back and came out my side. "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" I wailed in pain. We were both laying there. And as I start looking, I realize.. that... This is real life. Not some video game where you re-spawn and everything is Okay. I realized that if no help came, I would lay here. Dead. Next thing I know, subarurallyteamusa is sleeping... I hoped... And i was falling into a deep sleep... 2 HOURS LATER I woke up. I was painfully and mentally scarred. I was dehydrated. I was tired. I was hurt. I had a 2x2 Inch wound on m back cause by a plane bullet. I couldn't stand up. "HELP!" I whispered. A Paramedic came over and helped. Me and subarurallyteamusa started forming a crowd. "Are they gonna be okay?" said Neowolf543. "I don't know... Hopefully." the paramedic responded. "umg nou." said maripoi. "I hope they're okay..." said Shadowlite56. 1 HOUR LATER I could stand up. I woke up in the Hospital. I had stitches and bandages on my wound. I wanted to know what happened to subarurallyteamusa. "Hey, what happened to subarurallyteamusa?" I asked. "Oh they took him into the FEAR Venezia Battle Ship. They repaired it."Fireofflames95 replied. "Oh good." I said. ON THE FEAR VENEZIA BATTLE SHIP... WEO WEO WEO WEO "SIR WE HAVE BEEN HIT BY A TORPEDO!" A Private said. "Oh no.. What will we do with our wounded passenger?" Commander SONIC replied. CHAPTER 7: USS FEAR Venezia Battle Ship SWOOSH!! SWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHH!!!! BOOOOOMMMMM! The boat was roaring. Massive waves hitting the decks. HR's screaming orders. It was all too horrifying. The boat was rocking. You can hear the water rushing into the boats 2 wide holes. The boat was starting to tip over. Corporal RebeccaLynnFifield was running to the code room. tick tick tock tick tick tick tick She was typing a message. A message to nearby ships. As I listened carefully I could decode it. 'S.O.S, S.O.S, S.O.S'. We were in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. The boat was tilting over. The water was starting to get in through the crack on the bottom of the door. "NURSE!" I yelled. "Yes Officer luniso?" She replied. "LOOK AT THE WATER!" I exclaimed. She looked and then gasped. She fainted. I could hear RebeccaLynnFifield whisper "S...O....S.....S...O...S...". She was being careful. As if this was a life or death decision. It was. I started thinking about subarurallyteamusa. He is like a brother to me. I started testing my leg to see if i could walk. I could. Although it hurt a little. I started limping across the room. I slammed the door open. More water started coming in. I saw subarurallyteamusa. "DUDE, OVER HERE!" I yelled as I noticed he could walk perfectly fine. "Wasn't you're leg hurt?" I questioned. "Yea but it was only a muscle that broke in half." He replied. "I broke my leg. :(" I said. "Less talking more walking!" He said. We ran to the decks. The boat was starting to tip over. As we hang on for our lives, we hear planes. At first I thought they were enemy planes. But when I looked, they had the FEAR Logo. They turned around and next thing we know, the USS FEAR SONIC Battle Ship was speeding towards the sinking USS FEAR Venezia Battle Ship. I saw Privates running around dropping Anchors and dropping the Life Boats. One Private waved at me. I looked closer and realized it was Private StarForces!The boat was now on it's side. And it was turning. As the Life Boats were letting us crawl on, I wondered were Commander SONIC was. And as always, he was getting out. When subarurallyteamusa and I were off the ship, we went to the Break Room to enjoy a well deserved rest. 3 HOURS LATER... We hit land. We had gotten back to Venezia. After we boarded off, we headed to Alianor. 2 HOURS LATER... At Alianor, we got prepared for battle as SONIC told us over the intercom that off the coast he saw VS getting Aircraft Carriers ready loaded with hundreds of planes. Officer arty427 was rushing. "Sir, were should I put these guns?" He asked subarurallyteamusa. "Just put em' were everyone could see em'." Sub replied. "ATTENTION ALL FEAR MEMBERS, LOAD YOU WEAPONS, I SEE THE PLANES TAKING OFF WITH BOMBS." SONIC said over the Alianor Intercom. VROOMMM!!! A plane flew by. Seconds later, I heard a loud BOOM!!! I rushed into the newly repaired building of Alianor and saw SONIC. "Lun, I want you to be the commander of the FEAR Epic Squad." He said. "Where are th-" I was but was interrupted bu the sight of a group of 5 people walking. When I looked at them, times slowed down. Those 5 people were: Colonel subarurallyteamusa, Colonel Fireofflames95, Officer Neowolf543, Colonel FerrariLambo, Officer Blaze5544. Fireofflames95 and FerrariLambo were leading the way. As to missiles were hurtling toward them, Fireofflames and Ferrari took out RPG's and shot the missiles in mid-air. "And... I'M the Leader of this Squad?" i asked. "Yes" Replied SONIC.
aceslayer111
#63897130Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:44 AM GMT

Needs more Aceslayer.
luniso
#63897162Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:44 AM GMT

Coming right up sir! ^.^
TheRealOptimus
#63897644Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:51 AM GMT

I'm never in these :/
luniso
#63897673Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:52 AM GMT

Olololol
fireofflames95
#63897822Tuesday, March 06, 2012 1:53 AM GMT

Lolz, I was in the front :3
Malcolt3
#63898313Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:00 AM GMT

Can I be the guy who comes in the helicopter and blows the enemies up?
ShadowLugia500
#63898489Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:02 AM GMT

wait what. there was a repeat in the story. oh and add me <3 "EAT SPOO"
TheRealOptimus
#63898553Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:03 AM GMT

Can I be the COL who you didn't the name of? [ Then just say you noticed it was Officer OptimusPrime1274 ] I wanna be in the whole story xD.
KingNoobthe5th
#63900107Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:25 AM GMT

Hmm...No this book is no good....It just needs a little pinch of....Me....Yeah thats what every War Story Good
Malcolt3
#63901217Tuesday, March 06, 2012 2:41 AM GMT

Maybe Aceslayer111 could duel some enemy HR in an epic battle. Medevil with swords, of course.
cpb1199
#63910022Tuesday, March 06, 2012 6:14 AM GMT

AWESOME
FerrariLambo
#63959091Wednesday, March 07, 2012 3:49 PM GMT

Nice! I took out the RPG missile like a Bawss. And Fireoffflame95 watched, k? Joke, Nice book :] ~ Commited FEAR -Honor Grand Officer FerrariLambo
Malcolt3
#63979866Thursday, March 08, 2012 12:31 AM GMT

When is next part comin' out?
Wizard2268
#63983800Thursday, March 08, 2012 1:39 AM GMT

Hey lun, I thought you said I was going to be in chapter 7. An Airforce Colonel... look back on your PMs.... :(
Batman438
#64018874Friday, March 09, 2012 12:13 AM GMT

Bro put me in it...
luniso
#64786171Thursday, March 22, 2012 8:54 PM GMT

Yea, sowwy, I get caught up and move you guys farther...
CyanOG
#64786278Thursday, March 22, 2012 8:55 PM GMT

war group nub. imature
luniso
#64789228Thursday, March 22, 2012 9:33 PM GMT

CHAPTER 8: Colonel The short battle was over. The COL's of the Squad wanted to talk to SONIC. "I just don't understand... He's an Officer! I am a Colonel! Ferrari, Sub, and I should be leading the Squad sir!" Fireofflames argued. "Who said he wasn't a Colonel?"SONIC replied. "Wait, so I am a Colonel now? :D" I exclaimed. "Do you want to be?" SONIC said. "This is preposterous!" Fireofflames was yelling now. "What do you mean? He saved my life!" SONIC was starting to get angry. "But...." Fire said and then walked away. I looked at sub, he was smiling at me. With a face that said "Congratulations". SONIC looked at me, Saluted, ripped my Officer badge from my chest, and applied a Colonel badge. I felt proud. "Congratulations Colonel Luniso." Said Ferrari. "Thanks." I replied. "I'm really proud of it." "Lun, you're so lucky! Congratulations!" Said Officer blaze. "Thanks! :D" I said. As the Squad and I proudly walked down the hallway, we ran into Officer Fireflame09225. "Omg! Congrats lun! :D" He said. "Thanks bro!" I said. "We gotta get going." "Sure! Bye!" He replied. "Alright guys, we have to stop by the Great Temple of Leaders to talk to Generals, and SONIC, about VS." I said. "Lets go." Neowolf said. As we hopped on the FEAR truck, a Private came up to us. "Congratulations on Colonel sir!" He said. "Thanks." I replied and we took off. It didn't take long for us to arrive at the Temple, it was only half a mile away. We hopped off and walked into the Massive, shiny, stone building. SONIC was surprisingly there before us. "Ahh. Great. They're here." SONIC's great voice boomed across the room. All the Generals were there. We all took a seat. "This is about VS, our ex-Allie." BrianK said. "It seems they have betrayed us. But why?" JasonIIII asked. "But this is impossible! VS and FEAR are great allies!" animalmagic's voice boomed. "Or are they?" Ferrari asked. "No. Not anymore..." SONIC said in a deep voice. "Lets raid them. At night. When they least expect it." "Okay, we will officially raid VS tomorrow night. Gather up the FEAR members." Said BrianK.
jamestheman99
#64789587Thursday, March 22, 2012 9:38 PM GMT

Very Nice. :]
Batman438
#64789658Thursday, March 22, 2012 9:39 PM GMT

Nice.
luniso
#64789782Thursday, March 22, 2012 9:41 PM GMT

Thanks.
CyanOG
#64794747Thursday, March 22, 2012 10:55 PM GMT

lOL Funny how kids , like war and stuff , kids in my class go crazy about it even though theyre 8th grade. Fro real , grow up this is imature and annoying.
XxJasonRxX
#67072321Friday, April 27, 2012 9:04 PM GMT

This was good :D
mepheliesthedark
#67072618Friday, April 27, 2012 9:08 PM GMT

How Long Did it Take to Type This? I Got a Story of My Own : Once There was a Man, He Joined FEAR. He Became The Best of The Best, But Greed and Admin Abuse Got to Him. He Became The Worst General of FEAR of all Time and Left... Its a True Story.

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