Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
RULES and GUIDES:
Ok, so here are the rules. No "auto-killing/random-betraying, or getting whatever you want." Now, here is the example character guide.
(Mine)
Name: John McCarno
Weapon: MP5 (Choices: MP5, M93R, or Uzi.)
Second Weapon: M9 (Choices: M1911, M9)
Grenade: Molotov (Frag or Molotov)
Now, lets start.
Beginning:
The day before it happened; no one listened. A hour before it came; no one listened. When it came; they wished they listened.
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VoidHackJoin Date: 2010-07-25 Post Count: 15753 |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
Um, ok? |
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Err.
He's using sarcasm.
The plot lacks detail. I highly suggest you add more to it if you desire a successful RP. |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
You think people these days could use less detail, and I wouldnt be a teacher. |
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LeodinJoin Date: 2010-05-17 Post Count: 3502 |
"The day before it happened; no one listened. A hour before it came; no one listened. When it came; they wished they listened."
What exactly happened?
Why didn't people listen?
What happened to said people?
Things need to be explained, not left to hang. |
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Your not a teacher.
Your a moron. |
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Camdis, people want to know what to expect in the RP.
As far as we know, this could be a sci-fi RP. Or a fantasy RP.
Some people aren't adapted to those genres.
Need I say more? |
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VoidHackJoin Date: 2010-07-25 Post Count: 15753 |
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LoganBJoin Date: 2008-04-18 Post Count: 2782 |
They're kind of right.
@bebi
You('re) not a teacher*
You('re) a moron* |
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foIieJoin Date: 2009-10-10 Post Count: 9504 |
True, Tai. The most horrible "rp" made. If it is a rp....
More like a dumb thing a guy says randomly.
Weapon choices: Fail.
Plot: Fail.
RP (if it is one): Fail.
This entire thing: Fail. |
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cpop12Join Date: 2009-09-12 Post Count: 239 |
I've got the power!This rp uhh well it lacks so much plot I barely know if there zombies space aliens a natural disater that got not so natural.
No offense. |
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NiftynessJoin Date: 2010-12-16 Post Count: 2377 |
The weapons...first of all, how would civilians get those kind of weapons? Second, why would they need weapons for the coming disaster? Is it the overused zombie RP, or what? Third, you only get a choices of six guns overall to pick two, and you didn't even give out the choice of MELEE WEAPONS. I mean, guns are fun, maybe one or two gun choices, but I would prefer if in a survival situation you had mainly melee weapons instead of overpowerd military-grade guns that you somehow got your hands on. |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
I love you all too. |
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GyroPulseJoin Date: 2011-06-05 Post Count: 4886 |
Name: Fatty McFhatMat
Weapon: Big Mac
Second Weapon: McRib
Grenade: Chicken Burger |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
Haha. |
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cpop12Join Date: 2009-09-12 Post Count: 239 |
If you getting sarcastic with us you shouldn't with me I'm just saying you need to tell us you can't just say no body listened.What happened tell us at least.I'm just saying what it needs just try again yeesh no need to get sarcastic. |
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There's a difference to pointing out flaws and just being a total idiot.
Sure, you've stated the problems. Don't rub it in their faces, quit going on about it. They've probably already learnt their lesson and everyone else comes and makes a running commentary of absolute crap! |
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faultydexJoin Date: 2010-09-18 Post Count: 24608 |
I think this RP is growing trolls. |
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cpop12Join Date: 2009-09-12 Post Count: 239 |
He probably stopped following the topi due to mean peeps if you reading this im sorry... |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
Your like totally correct. And I forgive you. |
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cpop12Join Date: 2009-09-12 Post Count: 239 |
If I join will that do? |
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Camdis21Join Date: 2011-05-28 Post Count: 264 |
Uhm... No.... to much flame and stuff on this forum post. |
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LeodinJoin Date: 2010-05-17 Post Count: 3502 |
@Camdis: Please, next time you make a roleplay, detail it a bit more.
Threads that don't have much detail, like this one, usually attract trolls. |
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