I made this song it took a while!! Plz dont laugh at it or tease it!!!

Join Date: 2008-09-20
Post Count: 3443

#6599694Saturday, March 21, 2009 3:09 AM GMT

You probably dont know this, but im waiting for you. Im missing you every second of the day. I like you in and out and in every way. Your gone now, but your still in my heart. This is the hardest part, to let go and leave. I know i wish i couldve saved you. Your Gone now, Your Gone now I know i wish i coulve saved you. Take a step back think things through Maybe that will help you too. I still wish you were here, even though im not clear. Your Gone Now , Your gone now. I cant stand withought you I need to think some more It's hard to go forward Day and night it only you and me I'm to sad to see I know i wish i coldve saved you Your gone now, your gone now Time to let go Im tryin though I cant, but I have to I gues im never gunna leave you. Your Gone now.

KingHoHolder

Join Date: 2008-06-21
Post Count: 480

#6600774Saturday, March 21, 2009 3:39 AM GMT

good but to much rime and make another but make it rock message when your done

dumbguy3000

Join Date: 2008-06-14
Post Count: 599

#6608865Saturday, March 21, 2009 6:20 AM GMT

sounds like good lyrics but i don't know the rythym of it

Jackie241

Join Date: 2008-09-20
Post Count: 3443

#6611232Saturday, March 21, 2009 12:11 PM GMT

Okay im making this new one now. I see you everywhere but, I havn't ever met you Your in my head all the time I guess I wish i coud call you mine Im trying to find you Even though I dont your name I'll look for you everyday! Maybe your just dream Somewhere farwaway I can't think while I'm alone But, I know I'll find you Somwhere by me I just cant see I see you eeverywhere but, I havent met you Should I finish?!?!

Seaurchin

Join Date: 2008-08-01
Post Count: 33

#6613775Saturday, March 21, 2009 1:46 PM GMT

You are very good!!! Keep up the great work!!! If this is something you wish to pursue in a career, I hope it all works out!!! =)

Jackie241

Join Date: 2008-09-20
Post Count: 3443

#6686352Sunday, March 22, 2009 11:56 PM GMT

Okay this is a diff one. Everthing Will be Okay in the End Everyday I want to escape this place You say no, just keep on stayin everything will turn okay in the end Im tryin to hard, I shouldnt be here Every night I fear I cant help but cry Its to much for me it hurts to bad You say, I should call someone I cant I have nuthin Everyday I want t escape this place You say no, just keep on stayin everything will turn okay in the end I cant see tonight Everythings a blur I see you leave I dont want to alone, but you have no choice Everday I want escape this place You say no,just keep on stayin everything be okay in the end I say theres gonna be an end It will always be this way I hurts every day I cant move a muve a mucsle Everything hurts. The next day I see you with car keys in your hand You say, come with me I can take to place you'll be happy every day So I go along in my head i think Everything will be okay in the end.

willy19

Join Date: 2007-09-07
Post Count: 2155

#6687828Monday, March 23, 2009 12:29 AM GMT

GOOD!!!!!!!!!

Jackie241

Join Date: 2008-09-20
Post Count: 3443

#6703347Monday, March 23, 2009 7:10 PM GMT