painkrc99Join Date: 2012-01-04
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horsetail had given birth to a kit and she mewed "ill name her waterkit...." waterkit mewled and suckled as the moons passed waterkit started falling on her face when she tried pouncing butterflies and one day the medicine cat posionpelt had watched her and soon when she reached her 6th moon posionpelt mewed to her "will you like you become my apprentice?" waterpaw had just looked at him surpraised she sighed because she wanted to be a warrior not a medicine cat but she just said "yes i will" soon in her training of becoming ravenclans medicine cat she bumped into torchpaw and they started to talk and soon she had fallen in love waterpaw had got her medicine cat name watermint a herb name posionpelt thought it would bring her good luck through-out the moons and soon watermint went along with her duties and then thornpaw had became a warrior but soon became the deputy and then leader watermint was so happy for him and she soon expected his kits because she loved him so much she kept it secret but some cats had found out and she named her 3 kits goldenkit falconkit and bloodkit but when bloodkit falconkit and goldenkit became apprentices bloodpaw and falconpaw were exiled watermint was heart broken and goldenpaw was her only kit in ravenclan now and soon there was battle with valleyclan a new clan that a warrior of valleyclan had made because torchstar hadnt listen to her she had ran out of camp and was attacked by a rouge...when she slowly died falconpaw was there to watch her die and soon when she went to starclan she faded and daisyleaf had given birth and she was reborned into the world |
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jcarsonw2Join Date: 2012-05-02
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No. |
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RecesityJoin Date: 2010-10-09
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Wow, Diamond. What helpful insight. I'm sure she will be a master RP'er soon with your amazing advice. |
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painkrc99Join Date: 2012-01-04
Post Count: 26 |
im already an rp this was my first forum i messed up on the other watermint's life and i cant delete it >:| |
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This is HORRIBLE.
LEARN HOW TO:
SPELL
PUNCUATE
CAPATALIZE NAMES/BEGINNING OF SENTENCES.
LEARN BETTER ENGLISH R-TARD. |
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painkrc99Join Date: 2012-01-04
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um bobby i can write my forums however i want.... |
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OH PAINKRC99
YOU'LL NEVER BE SUCCESSFUL IN LIFE.
GO CRY IN THE CORNER NOW.
I TROLL IF I WANT TO. |
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painkrc99Join Date: 2012-01-04
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you get a life bobby i already have one....i live a happy RPING life with my friends by my side |
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BOBBY,
Y U NO GET A LIFE. |
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jcarsonw2Join Date: 2012-05-02
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Lol.
Bobby. You have found such a trolling gold mine.
RAINBOW MANGO CHUTNEY |
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Oh Chinchilla~~
Such a retarded person.... Bad rper and drawer, eh?
Let me see you write a forum.... ;3. |
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Says the never-ending troller. |
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jcarsonw2Join Date: 2012-05-02
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Trolls can be awesome and cool.
Bobby is one of them. Now go away because your disturbing the good RPers |
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WORDS OF WISDOM, RIGHT THERE. |
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Carson.
The only people disturbing me are the trolls.
Dx |
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gwebster2Join Date: 2010-08-29
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Whatever happend to the insightful insight of insightfulness?
No. |
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I like this story, It just needs a couple of tweaks and it'll be like a book! :) |
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jcarsonw2Join Date: 2012-05-02
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NOW. I know that chinchilla is trolling.
RAINBOW MANGO CHUTNEY |
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All you trollers are idiots. If you fixed it up a bit, give it to someone to edit, it'd be fine. |
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How am I trolling? I'm giving some critiscm. Unlike you, I don't say it's horrible. |
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