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Hey guys, all my other stories have been getting more post so I decided to start a new one!
Summary: This is a story about a new person who joins roblox and trys to get rich and popular like other people. So lets start.
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Chapter 1: A Beginning
"So, what shall my username be, I know! Newb! Ppl shall think I'm cute and start to date me and love me!"
And so he named himself, "Newb"!. Well, of course he is new, so that means he needs to learn all the rules before he does something stupid. So what shall he do first, he was so exited to have a ROBLOX account, so mabey he should find someone to, date! He went to a game called, "Find A Date!"
Now, Newb had the default robloxian costume with square/rectangle shapped body parts and a roblox hat and the default smiley face. But then, he saw, a girl. A girl he, immediately fell inlove with. This girl also had the default roblo costume. The only difference was the torso squeezed in a little bit, and she had pink hair. Her name appeared to be, "Sally108."
Sally108 was crying on a bench. She was crying because of everyone she asked to go out with declined her while some slapped her. When she looked up she saw Newb. And she fell in love with him imediately as well. She stood up, walked over to him, and asked to go out with him
"Hello, Im sally108, wanna go out?
" Uhhhhhh sure! I'd love to!"
And so they went out to build a house together. It appeared that she was an expert builder, but newb was terrorible at it. She had build a luxurious mansion while newb only built 2 bricks on top of each other. Poor Newb.
"Hey, babe, Im not good at building so is it okay with you if I live in the same house as you?
" Uhh sure!" She said. And they went in together.
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Gimmy feedback, and I'll make a chapter. |
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It's ok, but newb has been reported for OD'ing. :P |
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tigerathJoin Date: 2010-08-28
Post Count: 1311 |
good story, and rulebreaking newb lol |
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Chapter 2: School For Newbs
Newb was having the best time of his life when suddenly, one day when he looked into his mailbox, a letter. It said,
Dear Mr.Newb,
Since it seems like you gotten used to roblox, its time you go to school. We calll it, the newb school. So we need you to attend it. WHen you graduate, you will be an official robloxian. For now, your considered a newbie. See you at school tommorow!
From, Mr.Kartain
Newb was kinda upset. He didn't want to go to school. But sally108 encouraged him.
"But what about bullies?" Newb complained
" There wern't any bullys when I was there last time! You'll be fine! And i'll know what will cheer you up!" Sally leaned over up to newbs face and.... kissed him on the cheek. He nearly fainted from that. He didn't wake up untill the net morning.
Newb got on the school bus, he didn't find it amusing people throwing stuff at him, and making fun of him for holding hands with sally108. He just sat down. What can possible go wrong?
When they arrived at school that day, he knew that math was first. He just sat down and went with it.
It happened so suddenly.
People in ski-masks came in and said this,
"IF ANYONE MOVES OR MAKES A SOUND, WE WILL SHOOT THEM! NOW SHUT UP AND DOWN!" He said that and shot the teacher in the head. Sally looked worried. She was about to sneeze. She then sneezed.
"AHA! YOU MADE A SOUND!" The guy aimed the gun at sally and shot her somewhere in the stomach. Newb didn't know where, but somewhere. He only hoped that it wasent a vital organ as she fell down screaming, then went silent.
At that moment, the cops came in, and shot the people in ski-masks. He then got out his raidio and said,
"This is partoll, we the suspects are down, I need a parapedic team for a a little girl, it looks like she got shot somewhere in a upper part of her body. The other lady, supposingly the teacher, is dead." Newb was even more worried now. Somwhere near the top! That is a more of a chance of her heart getting shot! Newb felt like he was going to throw up. He just ... well... felt dizzy, and.d.sdf..fe..ll..o..v.r......................f................................. Newb blacked out.
TO BE CONTINUED! |
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Bump again. Ill make a chapter soon. |
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tigerathJoin Date: 2010-08-28
Post Count: 1311 |
pretty decent
-Removed Builderman |
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Quasar99Join Date: 2009-11-21
Post Count: 9328 |
make new chapter! |
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snakehuntJoin Date: 2009-06-22
Post Count: 34463 |
10/10
Would read again. |
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Can people be added to the story? Like some of your older ones? :)
"You saying there's still more moves to this dance?" -Cad Bane |
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LisaKittyJoin Date: 2011-11-26
Post Count: 968 |
One word:
It is awesome!
Oops, 3 words. |
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wrong forum its supposed to be movies/tv/books |
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crs100Join Date: 2009-09-13
Post Count: 12342 |
I like this |
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Quasar99Join Date: 2009-11-21
Post Count: 9328 |
y u no make chapter 3?
i rate this a 314159/10. |
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No, its not. Look in the desc. of this forum. Movies/Tv/Books is for DISCUSSING movies and books. |
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elfxninjaJoin Date: 2011-04-22
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ADD MEH TO TEH STROY.
Great story. |
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is there anything here that has to do with roleplaying.....no, I'm not being a troll I'm just saying. |
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Chapter 3: The Newb School
Newb learned many things in newb school, But another letter appeared, it said:
Dear Mr.Newbs.
Seems like you are having fun at newb school, you made many friends,
But next year is easter, and we are going to have a easter party, so do
you mind bringing treats? PS - You're Teacher.
(My mind is out of sentences so im done with writing this chapter.)
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oops? you're supposed to write it
sorry
didn't notice
bye
ingore the chapter 3 i did
by the (not) irish robloxian |
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