Pros
I liked the whole western type theme, and the characters dressed the parts.
Cons
The camera work was very laggy. That's nothing you can really control, but I'd work on finding a new recorder to help.
The subtitles went too fast, and sometimes scenes didn't get cut very well.
Cussing shouldn't be allowed in a movie in ROBLOX.
I think this whole short film would've worked better as an introduction to a story. There wasn't a whole lot to keep me intrested, but it does show some good potential. If you just fix some of the technical areas I think any future work will be good.
Rating: 2.5/4 |