altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
(Gromo1311)
Ok! No Profanity!
I bathe in Vanity.
My girl Serenity is on me like a new song, Off of this.
She's too high for this.
I'm not into this,
She says I'm better than you,
But You just sip on mah residue.
Pour that syrup, Made In China fear us,
Odd Future got me, Then she's still dead.
Bliss is Silence,
The revine is this doe, Like 2 Chainz doe,
Lemme spot you,
Just give me look too like Lion doe.
So say Golf Wang doe
Rolling Papers doe
Radical, Just kill em all
(Altar30)
Genesis set me up all right,
So if you hate then keeping hating cause that was tight.
Our opinions the only one that matters,
Watch us butcher the haters as there blood splatters,
On your doorstep cause your next victim,
We kill em,
And i sound cliched but I don't care,
Cause I back my boys up like we were a pair,
Of real wolves Giving a real scare.
I'm Radical, and a Radical so me and genesis gonna start a genocide,
By burning a school bus with the kids still inside.
Don't get mad unless you were in there too,
I said I was sorry so don't lock me up, what did I do,
Video evidence now what's that do,
Gasoline can burn that too.
We commit to nothing but the crimes,
We redefined.
Im getting lazy,
So wrap up serenity,
Your vanity makes me laugh, it's that funny.
Your area code will soon be 655 plus 11,
I'm tired of life now so see yall in heaven.
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
Ummmm |
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This is tight. How did it get so many views that quick tho? |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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DUDE I HVE NO IDEA, CAUGHT ME BY SUPRISE :D probably from odd future and swag city plus Taylor's fans on average range to 600 so I guess there just active today :D!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
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The first verse is really random and the second is ok but then slips into a little randomness to. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
Ok now I think something glitched cause I just broke 800 >.> |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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@Jason I guess so |
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I still thought it was good. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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Thx |
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
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Just pointing it out the first verse rhymes this with this with this and doe with doe and doe. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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That was Gromo but in sure he knows what he was aiming for. |
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gromo1311Join Date: 2010-08-27
Post Count: 37 |
I'm very random , And I like to use the word "doe". Big woop ;3 |
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
Post Count: 11998 |
Yeah that's not a good thing. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
If he likes it then chill let him do what he wants |
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
Post Count: 11998 |
"If he likes it then chill let him do what he wants"
If he wants to be a rapper he should expect criticism not everyone just "oh that's cool do what you want." Don't post lyrics if you don't want any real thoughts other than "oh that's tight." |
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that wasn't too terribly great.
seems way too forced so to speak
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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Lol terribly great? |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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Dude this broke 2,000!!!!!!! I Love you MTer's!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
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that's called f5ing. You don't really have that many views. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
Are there really people that come and just F5 in forums? That's stupid -_-, watever I'm gonna keep thinking I'm special :D |
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Hi Altar, I like the song. Im working on a album, Featuring Doubleagent(forgot numbers) and Stefswagg. If u would like to be on it or help, Lemmeh know in a PM! |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
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Ummmmm I've never heard you rap. |
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This was dope need to Feature me in one. |
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DatFutaJoin Date: 2012-04-05
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So much f5
Jerry was a race car driver... |
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