That's probably the most bland plot I've ever heard of. Where's the conflict? Where's the suspense?
It would've been a lot better if, say, the dealer was some sort of criminal. After finding out the three protagonists won $1,500 through a contest, the dealer decides to make it his mission to get the rest of the prize money. This plot could not only create suspense and excitement, but also create some comedic situations.
It's just an idea, but it's a vast improvement from your "three guys go skydiving" plot. |