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romuluzJoin Date: 2010-04-12
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@Commander:
Lol, kay since you asked for it, I'll give you an entire universe I'm working on.:
Darvast Series:
Part II: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=148501899
Part III: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=148842793
Part IV: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149028339
Liberation... Not Invasion:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=122682468
We Are Nafarian:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=122106436
A Hero's welcome(Reposted this one cause I couldn't find the original post):
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149031017
And just a short timeline/background to the universe(Really outdated, and need to be elaborated more upon but it serves as basic skeleton for a short span in the universe.):
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=148896615 |
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romuluzJoin Date: 2010-04-12
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But of course I'm expecting biased criticism from you, but go ahead. |
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You're not expecting any of that from me considering you spatted it to Drakond, you idiotic fool. Btw, you give suggesions. You don't insult!!!! Get that through your head. |
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ZanziberJoin Date: 2008-12-08
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Where is part 1 |
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Welll done, it is quite interesting. |
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romuluzJoin Date: 2010-04-12
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My bad zanz, it's linked in the part II thread. |
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romuluzJoin Date: 2010-04-12
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Command. A few things.
1) I wasn't biased against this whatsoever, it's just got bad plot progression and bad character development/a lack of interesting characters. If I were to be biased I would call this bad all together. At the very least Drakond was good with wordplay and sentence structure. But that's the only redeeming quality to this.
2) Drakond has ticked a lot of people including myself off for rejecting genuine criticism. That and he's already abandoned this project long ago. |
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jacky051Join Date: 2012-02-23
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barry1234Join Date: 2008-11-30
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i miss this |
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OzzymenJoin Date: 2011-05-26
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- Sulvak Syndicate Drake Xul, Glory to Vaktovia |
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OppiusJoin Date: 2012-01-15
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Bump |
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OppiusJoin Date: 2012-01-15
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Bump
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barry1234Join Date: 2008-11-30
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ol times |
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OppiusJoin Date: 2012-01-15
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it was a great plot too bad he quit
really gave insight on the the whole roleplay vak thing gave me good vibes
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