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Im on fire cause I got fame
Im on fire cause I got swag
Im on fire cause I got awards
Then Ill be pwning all them noobs
Especially this dude who hates my rap
cause I bet he cant rap in real life
I got girls all over me
I cant stop with all this fame
Im on fire cause i got all my dream things
Im on fire cause im so lucky
Im on fire cause I pwn you with my crew
Im on fire cause I can destroy you
Im on fire because of all these things
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NineNyan9Join Date: 2012-07-09
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in rap it doesn't have to rhyme as long as it matches your song |
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Crash6351Join Date: 2008-10-17
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"in rap it doesn't have to rhyme as long as it matches your song"
actually it does have to rhyme
that's the biggest attribute of rap
you're automatically terrible if you don't rhyme |
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Fire? More like hot garbage.. |
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OP is trying to copy my #basedyolo notcool/10
#YOLOHAUST #YOLOGANG #2COOL #NILBOG |
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rxnetworkJoin Date: 2008-06-29
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i can rhyme
check out my freestyle
chocolate rain
its quickily crashing through your vains
chocolate rain
yu see guis |
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You said: in rap it doesn't have to rhyme as long as it matches your song
Wow you must fail at life. Rapping is like poem with rhythm
Allow me to show you
This is a rap segment
This guy needs a rap lesten
You won't be signed
You'll be in demise
I fight
You ain't even right
I DON'T LIKE
I'm on top of two worlds
Got so many g!rls that It hurts
Ross Lynch
He's Austin
Well at least he can SING
Listening to you I'll vommit
All the rhymes i BRING
It's an Aubrey Grahm thing
Aubrey Grahm is Drake, you little ding
Don't you sit down, watch Degrassi
He's Jimmy Brooks
Different song, same hook
And none of the hooks I took
THAT'S how you rap. |
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You're darn right it was.. |
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KodakBuckJoin Date: 2011-04-14
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That was terrible..
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Was just as bad as the original rap. |
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Lol. Virtual girls on you. |
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When you observe a song like Eminem's "Lose Yourself", you notice how poetic it is.
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's chokin' how, everybody's chokin' now
The clock's run out, times up, over, blaw!
Snap, back to reality, oh, there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit he choked, he's so mad but he won't
Give up that easy, no, he won't have it he knows
His whole back's to these ropes, it don't matter he's dope
He knows that but he's broke, he so stagnant he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody better go capture this moment
And hope it don't pass him
You better lose yourself in the music
The moment, you own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime, yo
Notice the amazing rhymes he does. Notice he has a rhythm and meter. Notice all the different elements he adds, including onomatopoeia, alliteration/assonance, imagery, and more.
TL;DR RAP IS MEANT TO BE POETIC. ACT LIKE A DAMN POET.
yolo |
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That song was when Eminem was illuminati -.- |
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>That song was when Eminem was illuminati
Somebody's been watching some informative youtube videos i presume
#YOLOHAUST #YOLOGANG #2COOL #NILBOG |
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the only exception to this is yolomasterflash
he has too much swag for rapping
yolo |
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Sorry bro my cousin wrote this not me and im not lying because i wasn't at home during this. Iam rewriting this because he sucks at rapping. |
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Hey i have revised it and its better ok
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jason8630Join Date: 2008-12-11
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yo i made this song 1rd u copy dog? |
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Hey I did get signed with 2 records |
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PenBladeJoin Date: 2012-12-27
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Err. That was the worst song I've ever seen. Ever. My 10 year old brother is better than that. And he doesn't rap. Legit, dude. That was horrible. That was awfu-horri-terrible. I take this as an insult that you call this rap. Legit. |
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actually it does have to rhyme
that's the biggest attribute of rap
you're automatically terrible if you don't rhyme
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lil b doesnt even rhyme half the time he is consider a rapper
no one in rap really rhymes they force it by inflections
cause i could why orange with door henge when really they both dont rhyme |
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Jared343Join Date: 2009-03-02
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Lil B is a parody rapper. |
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yes and no
but he can rap he just can't freestyle
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I don't understand why the good "ro-raps" get so very few comments but the horrid ones get bombarded with comments.. |
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