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Death.
The stink of decay surrounded the garden of SONIC. As a body was lifted out of the dirt A body of the great Commander SONIC. A man who had disappeared for 6 months and finally was found. Found dead. The question was how...and by who?
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Dimensonrip walked out of the interrogation room. He had been there the night SONIC disappeared. Along with Protectorzz, Roboticman1212, and NiraGold. They were having a private meeting at SONIC’s mansion. That night he disappeared and wasn’t found. . FEAR was now in chaos, due to indeed their commander had been killed. Who’s fault was this...for now all the blame was pointed on these 4.
“Great...I bet I’ll see myself on the cover of Venezia’s Most Hated.” Pro commented.
“It’s not too bad...” Dimenson reassured.
“Well, I didn’t do it....” Nira said. All of them were sure none of the others had committed murder.
“It had to be a FEAR member, someone high up...how would he enter the mansion?” Robot said.
“Well...no..not exactly. If I remember that was the week of the clan summit meeting. Which was held in Venezia.” Dimenson said. He thought if any member or clan leader hated SONIC very much. He thought many people did. It was interrupted. All 4 of them recieved a message at the same time. It was a blocked ID.
“Death is my favorite scent. I’d kill for it. I know what you did. Secrets are easily spread. Right Zach and Maple? For now I am your SONIC, your Commander. Do what I say. Mentioning me to others isn’t a good idea. The best secrets are the most twisted.”
-S
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Neel664Join Date: 2011-10-25
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1st, and hi. :D |
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bot1242Join Date: 2010-10-20
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Can I be in it?
FEAR MAJ Bot1242 |
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cpb1199Join Date: 2011-06-30
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I wanna be in it, please. |
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RAG3GUYJoin Date: 2011-09-18
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Very nice story, well done DimensionRip 10/10! |
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S? Yes, I admit. I did it. |
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SONICs dead? BrianK is commander now. HE KILLED SONIC!! |
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If SONIC died, then Brian would take command, in the hint it said "I am your commander now" That means the one speaking is Brian, likely not 100% but likely |
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Sounds pretty cool Dimension... It would be cooler if I was in it :3 |
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Holy.... This is epic.... MAKE ANOTHER ONE! |
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I love it . If you write more or a lot tonight, I'll shout it in Chapters. |
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Could I be in the next one? |
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Stealing Pretty Little Liars eh? |
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The things you write are flawless.
Good job, and keep up the good work.
Also, try to add the Magnus family in it.
I am Enzo, kthx
-{ ~Lord Density }- GSC or die. |
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Seriously. Nobody else noticed this is almost exactly like Pretty little liars? There are 4 of them suspected of killing their popular friend and a person named A killed there friends and is threatning them... Nobody? |
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Redsoxs4Join Date: 2011-06-15
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I call the bad guy. <3 |
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ZaggerIIJoin Date: 2012-05-09
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Can I be in the Next one? Just asking... |
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Trevor, It isn't majorly based of that. Most people dont even know what that serious is. It's much more different. I just like the idea of murder and mystery. |
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The FirSt Secret
[Change: Since Nira Quit FEAR, Lilprivera is now taking her place]
Secrets. They tear people apart. At first Dimenson was confused on what this person was talking about. But he thought back, to the first day him and his three friends started their toll of secrets that would continue on.
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Three years ago, the 4 friends were at an ice cream parlor. Andrew2899lee got a scoop. He walked next to Protectorzz, and spilled his near-melted vanilla gelato all over him.
“Oops. My mistake.” He said in a sarcastic voice.
“Why you are such a-” Pro said, but was interrupted.
“Don’t even. He’s too low for it anyways.” Robotic suggested. Sadly, Protectorzz wasn’t the kind of mellow guy to accept apology. He wanted revenge. That night they played a trick Andrew.
The plan was simple. Spread sleet on the stairs of his house. So that he’d fall back into the snow and get a face full of ice. It went terribly wrong. That night, Andrew did go back to his house, and did slip. But not on to the snow, onto the stairs. The stone stairs. He had an extremely bad head injury. Causing him to become blind.
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For now no one knew that secret. Or so they thought as another message came on their phone.
“Revenge is a dish best served cold. Or in your case revenge was something caused by a cold dish being dumped. :]
-S”
“But..But how does he-” Lil stuttered.
“For now we should be careful. It seems this person knows much more than we think. “Dimenson said. As they walked someone ran up to catch to them.
“Hey Pro, hey others. Anyways Protectorzz, my birthday is this this weekend. Your invited, of course. You guys should come too.” Neel664 said, and than walked into the bus stationed next to them.
“We should go!” Protectorzz said.
“Err.. I’m not very fond of going to your best friend’s birthday party. He kind of creeps me out.” Lil said. Another ring came, another message.
“Happy Birthday to you! You're living right now! But you will die too. Go to that birthday, or face the same fate as your precious commander will meet the birthday boy.
Love
-S
PS: What should I get him? Do you think a few liters of poison will do?” |
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Add me= epic story twist. |
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^Don't add some noob. Add me. 피_피 This is my epic face. |
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^ means up. Not yourself Dark. |
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^Roblox you finally pass your lesson. You get a F. For just knowing that this "^" means. |
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