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I want to be in it. :P If you ever make this a real long story, I could be somone like....Idk |
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TAZRHAWXJoin Date: 2011-12-03
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I would like to be in it too |
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Not a few liters of poison, but acid.
-{ ~Lord Density }- GSC or die. |
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ZaggerIIJoin Date: 2012-05-09
Post Count: 72 |
I must be included in this story! As some kind of guard! OR ELSE... |
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You should make me one of the suspects. Seeming how you probably have the person who it will be that killed SONIC. |
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Nice story! Can I please be in it!
-FEAR Major Chicken |
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BEST-STORY-EVER!!! Cliffffff hhhaaaannnnnggggeerrrrr I WANT TO KNOW WHO THAT DUDE IS! He said Zach and Maple. HR. Only higher people know Zach is pro. Then, MAPLE is OLLLDDD AACCCOOOUUUNNNTTT. THAT MEANS this person has been around for quite some time. Who is it? :o |
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Actually Maple and Zach are Dim and I's old 2010-2011 accounts. |
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Presents and Poision
Presents were everywhere. Some wrapped with tape, others with glue. All of them though were colorful and gleaming. Except for one. A few hours before, the 4 friends got a message.
“Hey, I finally decided! I’m going to get something that really goes bang for the birthday party. I’m sure Neel will EXPLODE with happiness.
-S”
They figured it was a bomb.
“But...Why. Why at Neel’s party? Isn’t it a bit random?” Pro inquired.
“It’s true. How does SONIC’s death have anything to do with Neel?” Robotic asked.
Dimenson sat there thinking. But sadly he was interrupted by Neel.
“Guys gather around. It’s time for a scavenger hunt.” He yelled. Pro walked to get the list excitingly. The others trailed along, rolling their eyes. The first parts were easy.
“A ball, a cup, hmm we need a daisy.” Protectorzz said, thinking. Lil rolled her eyes.
“Shouldn’t we be worried more about the bomb that you know will kill us all.” Lil said ina loud voice.
“Agreed.” Dimenson said nodding his head.
“Please can we just find the daisy and we’ll be done! Oh there is one in SONIC’s garden!” Pro yelled walking to the gate. Neel and SONIC were neighbors, they had gates connected their houses. Sonic’s garden was huge so he let people come in. They started looking for the daisy. Suddenly a flash appeared.
“What was that...” Robot asked and walked back. Under the dirt there was a camera. Dimenson took the camera and turned it on. There was one video. One video entitled to the night SONIC disappeared. Dimenson played it.
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The video took place in the garden. SONIC was sitting down on his porch.
“And you are not scared Piede will get angry about you blackmailing him?” A voice asked.
“Hah, that fool. The moment I found him planning to steal money from the RAT funds to help some of his poorer Frostian friends, I took my chance. Now he assists me by giving me a large portion of the RAT funds. Funny huh? How I can take some money from one person’s little mistake.” Sonic replied.
“One second sir, I need to get my other camera. So we can continue with this interview.
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“Piede. S is Piede.” Lil said immediately.
“We can’t assume that...” Dimenson said. They heard screaming. Police were around the perimeter. Getting everyone evacuated. The 4 friends ran out. They heard a boom. An explosion went. Fire fighters came into the mess.
“Guys the garden is destroyed too...” Dimenson said.
“So...?” Lil asked.
“So, what if S didn’t care about Neel? What about this tape we found. He probably lost it and needed it gone...” Dimenson said.
“Well we know who are first suspect is. Piede.” Lil said, as a beep came, they checked their texts.
“I hope Neel had great party. I heard it certainly ended in a boom. I hope you didn’t find anything else on your scavenger hunt. If it wasn't part of the hunt, you really shouldn’t tell anyone about it.
-S” |
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LejammJoin Date: 2009-06-04
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dun dun dunnnnnnn |
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pfffffttttttt I would be all like "NEEL!!! NOOOOO!!!" But then... the bomb... where was it? LIKE COME ON!!! INNNNFFFOOOOO |
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Neel is ok.
The police evacuated the area. |
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How'd the police know? If the police evacuated the area wouldn't the person still be after Neel? And this means that the "S" knows exactly what they're doing. Maybe it is Neel? :o |
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Err the police knew because he found the bomb when opening his presents. |
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dimenson epik story. it would be preeaty cool if I were in it. maybe you should make a serious of chapters like this bundled together as the "FEAR chronicles" that would make $. |
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diuto717Join Date: 2012-01-27
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Hmm... Did you guys know I saw the person killing him it was......... pspjohn1. |
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Dim put me in the Next one. :3 |
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TAZRHAWXJoin Date: 2011-12-03
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What if S is DOCTORCOOPER, because he said if he got the chance to get rid of sonic, he would |
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ComradiusJoin Date: 2011-01-03
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Great job, Sir! Make more of these!
-Azurian Legion Imperator, Slot. |
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meatflapsJoin Date: 2011-03-31
Post Count: 363 |
Put me in? :] |
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Suspicions
Impenetrable. The entrance to the RAT’s hotel in Venezia was impenetrable. Guards surrounded the building, keeping the perimeter safe. Two helicopters flew in the air, keeping an aerial view. Snipers were perched on the top along with it all. The only way in was underground.
“Are you sure it is Piede?” Protectorzz asked.
“It’s our only lead.” Dimenson answered.
“I’m not very fond of S’s last message.” Pro said. The last message of S was:
“You are invited to the RAT’s grand galle and opening of their new museum in Venezia. Many important people will be there, HippieVanz, Cj, Piede, and ColourTheory himself. I’m hoping to add a new exhibit. But the museum has a strict no live exhibit rule. I guess that won’t be a problem.
-S”
“He’s going to kill a RAT leader. Thats why we sent Nira and Robot over there.” Dim said.
“S is obviously Piede. He’s going to kill the RAT leaders, except for himself, leaving him in charge of RAT.” Pro analyzed.
“For now let’s get to Pie’s room, and see if we can find anything before he gets back.
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The RAT party was full of the rich, the snooty, and the pompous. To sneak in, Nira and Robot needed to have a suit and a fancy dress. The museum was mostly dedicated to ColourTheory himself. There was one exhibit in particular which was dedicated to RAT’s past leader.
“This suit is chaffing me.” Robot complained.
“Bare through it. We cannot have SONIC’s killer in charge of RAT.” Nira said. Their phones rang simultaneously.
“Enjoying your glasses of wine at the RAT museum. I hope that suit doesn’t hurt you too much Robot. That’s my job. Ever heard the saying, art tells a story. Well today, art is going to add a new chapter. I specifically like the a color that is red as blood.
-S”
“How did they know...”Robot wondered.
“Nevermind that, He’s obviously going to use something in the art to kill them. We need to check Pie’s pocket’s if he has some remote control or something.” Nira ordered. They walked next to Pie leisurely. They tried to check his pockets, but he walked to the bathroom. Meto02, a famous RAT great admiral walked up towards a statue of Ploober33, when he controlled RAT for a short period. Suddenly, the sword he was holding struck down. Meto was dead. His red blood splattered everywhere. Pie walked out of the bathroom, making himself look innocent. A text appeared a few seconds before.
“I hope they include my addition to the museum. It took some work.
-S.”
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Pro and Dim finally got to Pie’s room. They checked everywhere. Dimenson went to Pie’s desk. He accidently pushed on of his little statues down. A drawered opened.
“Pro come look...at this.” Dim said motioning him to come.
Inside. A second video camera, identical to the one in the garden... |
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lolwut I don't like suits. Fits me greattt <3 |
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