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tommycarver2077
#87070493Wednesday, January 16, 2013 5:04 PM GMT

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Hi guys, Just a little story I made up. Hope you enjoy it! -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Chapter one: The rise of the undead Tommy Carter sat alone at his father's funeral. Right now, the coffin was being hauled down into a ditch at the graveyard. Tommy had a brother named Ryan. Ryan came over and sat next to Tom. "Why the long face, mate?" Ryan asked his brother. "Isn't is obvious? We're at a funeral..." Tom replied "Right..." Ryan quickly closed his mouth. He elbowed Tom. Tom looked up at his older brother. "It'll be okay. He's in a better place now." "I know" Tom said, rolling his eyes. **************** I'll add more later ****************
picklebuddy7321
#87071135Wednesday, January 16, 2013 5:24 PM GMT

Good... so far...
tommycarver2077
#87071204Wednesday, January 16, 2013 5:27 PM GMT

Thanks.........................
tommycarver2077
#87083273Wednesday, January 16, 2013 9:40 PM GMT

Tom looked over to his left. He saw a figure, hiding in the shadows. He saw it wave a hand at him, then it dissapeared back into the shadows. "I gotta go to the bathroom..." Tom lied to his brother. Ryan nodded. Tommy crept out of his chair and huddeled over to the mysterious figure. It was his father! He had a bullet wound in his chest and had an eerie glow around his body, which was translucent. "I though you were dead...?" Tom asked his ghostly father. "I am." rasped the dead soldier ghost infront of Tom. "Your..." stamppered Tom. "Your a ghost?!" he exclaimed, raising his voice while he didn't mean to. Tom's dad covered his son's mouth with a see-through hand. "Be quiet, boy! I came here to be with you and ryan! So be quiet!" he shouted. "How come your shouting and I can't?" "Because I'm a ghost. No-one can hear me except for you. I will reveal myself to your brother later." the ghost smiled. "Go back, son. Go tell your brother the news." And before Tom could protest to anything his father had said, the ghost had faded away. Worried, scared, frightened, tommy stumbled over to his seat. Should he tell his brother? Tommy could not decide.
tommycarver2077
#87150011Thursday, January 17, 2013 9:07 PM GMT

Ryan looked over to his brother. "You okay? You seem a bit... Disturbed." he said. "I'm fine..." lied Tom. He decided to not tell Ryan what his dad had told him. He would tell him sometime... Maybe. Tom still wasn't sure. *** Finn Evergreen looked through the forest. He was riding his pet horse, Storm. Finn stood infront of three other boys behind him. One of them was a man, like Finn. They were also on horses. The first one to the left was called Daniels Ryder. He was a 15 year old boy. .-.-.-.-.-.-..-...-.-.-.-.-.-.-.._._._.

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