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This isn't a Ro-Rap. These are lyrics I might consider recording soon.
This is just a verse. No hook. I wasn't creative with the title so...yeah
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Verse 1:
Welcome to my home,the place that I love but sometimes really hate
I would arrive to class in time but the teacher would say I'm late
People would say I'm the best but I'd say I'm not that great
When I would have good opportunities I would say no and wait outside the gate
I would always regret it and tell myself it's too late
I had my dreams crushed but I didn't let it bother me
I was told my work was art like it was a piece of pottery
But I would also let others hate it,let them throw it in hell
I didn't let it bother me,because it was my fault it was a fail
I had others follow me like I left a trail
I hate mainstream,I'd rather be unknown
I would ignore other people like I won't pick up the phone
Been called a king but never sat on a throne
I don't like being bothered,I'd rather be left alone
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Ignore that king line. I was just trying to be creative.
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I hadn't wrote a song in a while sooo...I lost my creativeness and writing techniques and crap like that. |
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Same here but i liked it Jaylen |
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RegimenJoin Date: 2011-07-18 Post Count: 9431 |
Not bad, needs more nikka in it XD, nope. Support+ |
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Also...That big gap...Idk how it got there... :p |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26 Post Count: 1925 |
Nice one Jay, been awhile since I've seen some classic guys on here |
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shonyshonJoin Date: 2008-02-23 Post Count: 8192 |
"Not bad, needs more nikka in it XD, nope. Support+"
That's like saying Jay Z needs more nose..
Good verse, J. |
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you played with your words like Lil Wayne, I bet if you tried to sell it to him he would buy it |
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LilRacJoin Date: 2012-08-17 Post Count: 572 |
Jay, you've done it again. Nice verse. Look forward to hearing it for real.
(Rac is recording irl) |
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Thanks guys and best,If I could,I give it to my influence whom isn't Lil' Wayne. |
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atibbJoin Date: 2011-08-17 Post Count: 2008 |
haaan this fire tho Good Job (y) |
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Call me jaylen johnson next hopsin
Or should I say hopson son cause I already won
I derped your mom.
I have a bomb
I am muslim [notreally]
ALAHLAHLAHLAH
Joking. :/
ALLLALALALALAL
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Thanks immortal and lol biskit |
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RegimenJoin Date: 2011-07-18 Post Count: 9431 |
Jay, you record IRL right? Channel or whatever it is? |
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I don't share my stuff yet but when I do it will be on sound cloud or YouTube |
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PenBladeJoin Date: 2012-12-27 Post Count: 1633 |
I record. Tryin to get some actual equipment instead of my music player to record :/ Anyways, good verse. |
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FozdiJoin Date: 2013-02-09 Post Count: 2590 |
I liked your verse, good luck with the recording bit. |
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Thanks,Penblade and Fozdi. |
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atibbJoin Date: 2011-08-17 Post Count: 2008 |
Allah is god dont f with him >:p |
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