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PenBlade
#89190545Wednesday, February 13, 2013 9:57 PM GMT

Here's a single from my upcoming album. ____________________________ Look, it don't matter if I'm, Young V1: This life is a crime, But I'm livin' it, I ain't wastin' time, (tick tock)/ Never turn back, I really ain't missin' nothin', Instead of livin' to die, Y'all are dyin to live, Tryna live inside a coffin,/ Under influence, over achievers, Y'all are such a nuisance, I am your Grim Reaper,/ Make sure y'all heard me early, I tell em "Why wait?" It's too late to save face, but it don't matter if I'm Hook: Young, young, Yes sir, I am insane, Young, young, But you know that I am the king, Young, young, I leave it all in flames, Nah it don't matter if I'm Young V2: Ay, Jeezy told me get that money, be a duffel bag boy, Them dime bags, nickel bags, hustlin chores, But Eons D said go to jail, you get out you unemployed, Now you a Winn Dixie, Target, or a Kroger bag boy, And uh, if I'ma listen to the colleges, I would prolly come out soundin like theology, Agnosticin', Tolerance, I can do whatever with no consequence, Partyin', partyin', with a couple barbies, Listenin' to Bob Marley's, Ignorance is bliss, with no intuinance, The only problem is, This. Ain't. Real. I was locked up in a box car, Couldn't rock the top, Unless the keys popped up, Brought up in the bottom, Hearin' bout riches up above, How could I believe that leavin' people breathin deciet And heavin' up in these streets could breed love? I've had enough. So they say you young, live your life, Do what you want, I think they right, Cuz I want realness, livin' in my rhymes, You only live once, but you can die twice. Hook: Young, young, Yes sir, I am insane, Young, young, But you know that I am the king, Young, young, I leave it all in flames, Nah it don't matter if I'm Young
Supreme_Kevin
#89197120Wednesday, February 13, 2013 11:06 PM GMT

Honestly not your best. :/
PenBlade
#89241938Thursday, February 14, 2013 4:33 PM GMT

I know. I'm trying to get back to where I was with Gravity. I took quite a long break though so it's gonna take some work. This was kind of a warm-up almost.
PenBlade
#89241985Thursday, February 14, 2013 4:34 PM GMT

I think the 2nd verse was alright, but even I didn't like the 1st verse.

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