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guppy's bored :[
Chapter 1: Brats and Knockouts- Carl Ignitor
“This ‘clan’ won’t last forever, Carl,” the raspy voice whispers to me.
At first I think it’s the Frost River, but frightened I jump back and then hesitate. Nothing is wrong for it is just Peter Shadow, my dear pal, and then I remember what he told me.
“What do you mean?” I questioned.
“What do you mean!” he shouted angrily. “What do you mean!? I mean this, Carl. This clan is one day gonna die out. They’re not a real military, they’re just goofy brats!”
“Shadow, we can’t leave. We’re role models. We’re expected to say. We love Frost Clan. We can change them, Shadow. All it takes is a little effort. Our allies are strict; why don’t we do trainings like them just a little less strict?”
“The reason why we don’t do that is because it’s not the soul of FC, but I do have a question for you Carl. How long do you think Frost Clan is going to last?”
I was going to say forever, and then I thought to myself and sunk it in. How long would Frost Clan last? I knew they were powerful, but I wondered how long it could last. There would be a time when it would be ‘Ancient Frost Clan’, and we’d be forgotten.
Shadow asked, “Who still likes you, Carl? Are you still respected? Do you joke around with all of your friends?”
I couldn’t look Peter in the eye. Slowly, I shook my head. I felt ashamed and like an idiot. Who was I to think that I still had friends in the clan? I thought for sure that Peter wasn’t persuading me.
Finally, I asked Peter, “What is the purpose of this, Shadow?”
He looks deeply into my eyes for a few second, but it feels like minutes of him figuring out the code to hi-jack my body. Shadow glances away, but then looks at me with a puzzling face. He replies, “You’re smarter than I realized, Carl. But to be fair, I’m going to tell you what the purpose is without any clues.
“I’ve been realizing that FC is falling. For weeks now, I’ve been thinking over and over again about how to stop it…”
“Wait, wait, wait,” I interrupt. “Frost Clan is not falling!”
Peter smirked, and I saw evil in his eyes. His brown hair was turning to gray, and the more I noticed, he had been becoming older and sinister. I realized his days are coming to a halt soon, and he wanted to be recognized for something.
“Frost Clan is marking up its age with ‘fun activities’ and such. When was the last time we had a purpose of a war?”
I didn’t look at him.
“Exactly. Frost Clan needs to learn a lesson. I’m sick and tired of this non-sense. I like fun, but I like seriousness. Changes shall be made, Carl, and they’re going to happen quickly.”
I received one final glance and him before he trotted off into the village. I sat down on the grass, and thought over what had just occurred. I believed that Peter was going nuts, but I pondered over my choices. I could stay in the Frost Clan, or I could make a difference. Still, what was the purpose of all of this? It made no sense to me. Was he trying to start a rebellion or was he going to protest. That’s when I collapsed and my heart beat stopped.
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AkbarrJoin Date: 2012-11-02
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nice. |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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you did not read it that quick |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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I'll be updating this every day or so.
I might get 4 chapters done in a day, I dunno. |
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wd73Join Date: 2011-08-22
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Reminds me of an old story that I was working on before scrapping it.
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Tanner416Join Date: 2011-03-03
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this seemed boring so i didnt read it
and you not to stop making so many threads gup
>~Jennifer Lawrence~< |
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IrdusialJoin Date: 2010-05-30
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will i be in next chapter?
~Rabadash~ |
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ezaiahsJoin Date: 2011-06-28
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sam
why are you not advertising wal mart |
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IrdusialJoin Date: 2010-05-30
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"sam
why are you not advertising wal mart"
feb. contract expired
~Rabadash~ |
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SlurzenJoin Date: 2011-10-27
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star of the story |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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Naw Sam, I'm already on Chapter Three, but you can be in it. :o
in chapter three hunter's being a big baby because shell breaks up with him. |
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where's the intensity of the snows?
-Hunterspeedy |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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peter, it's SHADOW, not peterp12.
sorry, forgot about you lololol. |
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SlurzenJoin Date: 2011-10-27
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ohhh lol |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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well atleast u have a col name |
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1Ali1Join Date: 2009-09-01
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nice story.
can i be in it pls |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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You can be a rebel, Modern. :o |
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IcyPotatoJoin Date: 2012-04-22
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I'm a spy in this. c:
{We're out of fraiz!!!!!} |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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YOU RUINED YOUR COVER, MORON!
RUN TO ALASKA BEFORE THEY CAN CATCH YOU! I'LL MAKE SURE TO HAVE MY ALASKAN STATE TROOPERS SHOOT EM DEAD!
heil justin bieber |
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gup10Join Date: 2011-02-04
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Finished Chapter 2 yesterday, and now I'm unvieling it. not really 'juicy' but yeah.
Chapter 2: Es-cap-eh.- Carl Ignitor
Everything was gray at first, and then the world slowly turned into color with a gray mist tinting the ambient. My eyelids were barely cracked open, and I noticed that everybody looking at me was worried. Frank T. Smith was biting his nails, Henry Gonomola was anxiously talking, and Anthony Onster was looking all over the room and sweating.
I opened my mouth, but nothing came out. I tried again, and finally a rough sound left my body. It was almost impossible to hear, but everybody jumped. Joy spread to everybody’s faces, and I looked all over the room. Right away, I noticed I was in some sort of chamber. It was a concealed hospital in the mountains, and I guessed it was the hospital Mike Kish made when he was still alive.
The room was glorious. White marble was built for the wall frame, and a gigantic bay window was to the left of my comfortable bed. Amazing technology was used for the medical equipment, and it was one of the best hospital/recovery centers in the entire land of Frost Clan.
Quickly, I dozed off again. When I rose up from my bed sheets, nobody was in the room. I cursed FC, and took out my knife. I cut my hand, and drew on the wall with my finger ‘ONE FROSTOVIAN GONE, ONE AFTER ANOTHER’.
I set my eyes on the window and limped toward it. Looking down, I rolled my eyes. My legs were already in bad condition, and now the height of the drop would be at least 40 feet. Scanning the landscape, I spotted a fairly large snow bank. I darted across the room and put a pair of shoes on. They didn’t fit me; they were too loose, but they worked.
With all my strength, I sprinted to the window and kicked out and groaned. I hit the window with such force I went flying out. Carefully, I steered myself toward the snow bank and landed on my butt. It was painful, but it was better that way and not on my wobbly legs. Still, I crawled my way out of the hospital. A guy parked his old truck in the parking lot. With the knife in my hand, I came up behind him and stabbed him in the neck. I stole his keys, unlocked the car, and drove off toward the horizon. I checked the clock in the truck: it was 7:30. The man had a cellphone in the cup holder. I deeply dug into my brain and found
Peter’s number. I dial it and call. It rings for a few seconds.
“Hello?” Peter asks.
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Hey, Peter. Listen, I’ve thought about it.” I replied.
“About what?” he asks. I could tell on the other line he was grinning.
“We’re going to start a rebellion. Meet me at the Fire Café on Route 22.”
“I’m glad you’ve made your choice, Carl.”
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XmunkXJoin Date: 2011-09-17
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plox put me in |
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SlurzenJoin Date: 2011-10-27
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whats my name in the story cus I skipped through it lol. |
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