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hwen4
#91372691Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:14 PM GMT

It is based upon the idea that "Knowledge rules the world." As writers of the past wake from cryo-sleep into a nuclear wasteland, and began to reform it. The people of the world, now savages, are tamed, and in response they declare the writers gods. The one's that go along with it kill the other writers as a struggle of power is quickly lost and a empire is founded upon fake gods who know the technology of the past. fifty or so years later, a boy is soon-to-be executed for the assassination of a General, but is saved by a old man, the God of Justice. Before his death, the old man wishes for a end to this system, and teaches him the true knowledge of the past. Ya...
starrynina
#91372794Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:15 PM GMT

Wrong forum, but I like the rp idea.
MarkJarkson
#91372849Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:16 PM GMT

Cool idea, and starry, this is the right forum for stories, and ontop of that, OOC.
TaiWolf1234
#91372852Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:16 PM GMT

Actually, this is the right forum Starry.
hwen4
#91372987Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:17 PM GMT

It is going to be based around the story of Buddha, and how he learned the three pains of the world, but in this the boy will learn the good, the bad, and the ugly...
starrynina
#91373517Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:23 PM GMT

oh, I thought that this would be on movies tv books.
Mr44
#91374472Saturday, March 09, 2013 9:34 PM GMT

Here's my two cents: It seemed like a really good idea, until it got to "50 years later". I liked the idea that writers would try to lead a post-apocalyptic civilization. It'd be interesting to see their ideologies, beliefs, and egos clash as they try to decide the right way to lead the people. Then a curve-ball is thrown, and it turns out the bulk of the novel will take place "50 years later". The civilization is already set up, and some of the authors are already dead. Instead of focusing on the authors, our main character is instead some kid, who learns the "truth" of his government, or something. Frankly, I could care less about this random kid learning about the "truth". I care more about the writers and their struggle to create their "ideal" civilization.
hwen4
#91377994Saturday, March 09, 2013 10:12 PM GMT

This child was the son of a author that attempted to lead the rebellion years previous. With this, when he is about to be executed publicly, the God of Justice stops the execution, and tells the boy, he has that "Spark"
hwen4
#91378128Saturday, March 09, 2013 10:14 PM GMT

Though, thank you for the suggestions.

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