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altar30
#95137153Wednesday, April 17, 2013 4:44 PM GMT

(Altar30) The clocks been ticking, Your minds been racing, The past is fading, And your life's been wasting, Away. Time flys faster with every step of the way, The memories of your present become the past the next day, You hate it, but you can't do anything anyways. And a sense of self pity joins with it, That's because, you've let it slip, and your life isn't legit, And it all just makes you sick, You wish you could quit, but life just won't hear it. The past, all the memories you wish you could do over, The present, the consequences of what you should've done over, The future, who knows if you'll ever have one, Spent the days as a young one, having so much fun, And left out what's important, so you pick up A gun. We all know you won't pull the trigger, You've already wasted your life, you can't have a future, Your brains on the wall, all cause of a slip of the finger, No one will miss you, your lives already been over. My musics for visuals, Nothing's political, The feelings stay neutral, But I'll always be Radical (KeKeSwag) Real is the only thing free, I didnt know love cost but its paid by me Everybody else quit its an expensive fee Oh they poped up i o life man who is me My nightmare has come true, reality but im sitting on the top so call me queen You can call me real They aint no friends They stop talking to you, diss you then Get new ones that you havent seen since  On my baby doll swag dont forget the ken Im looking for the one, so tell me if its you Bout to lose another friend in 3, 2 dont get to one, please stop But without you im still climbing to the top Yes i make mistakes thats why i got a mop You love m then you hate me i call that flip flop Lord knows, i aint perfect So take me for this ride and i promise That its worth it If you know its true then you will not have to force it And if you do better than me then dont brag just work it I swear bro, in this crazy word we living in Where the realest is surround by this sin Im helping everybody i got no more hands to lead Every night my last words are amen (DinoDude1235) So I've been told that I'm amazing No much thing as Satan Music lyrics are just hazy faking Make sure to keep that fire blazing Have no time so I just rhyme and push I like the smell of pine, Now hop off this conscious D Most guys never make it What you gotta do homie is Nothing but your name, just switchin' the lanes Lucus gives me a therapeutic ball My mind says it don't help at all Now that was my entire month Y'all In my spare time, punching walls, Messing up my hand I know that sounds pretty crazy, but if you were me, you'd understand  God gave me this mark, yes, Im so odd Time is where you decide who your friends are all along But Hey! I wrote these songs, Now fire on the floor Homies smacking into doors, My life wasn't meant to be here with yours Now I've told you before I'm not that bird I diagnose these pills, they not working this term Disco track raps, turning into a burn People say they're concerned about me When really they never gave a damn about me We livin'.
RobloxProJakob
#95138887Wednesday, April 17, 2013 5:29 PM GMT

Awesome.
AnUnfriendlyGuest999
#95138909Wednesday, April 17, 2013 5:30 PM GMT

It'z aight, bruh, but fo real, you kan't kompare to the zwagfullnezz of #BazedGuezt.
altar30
#95138978Wednesday, April 17, 2013 5:32 PM GMT

Based guest shouldn't even be compared with, he's too based for us to handle
ducky980
#95143894Wednesday, April 17, 2013 7:21 PM GMT

im more based so i command you to handle sir 6/l0 @altar wayyyyy to basic and its style is no different from your other songs #bore @keke You did the worst here bro l. you cant rhyme it with it and it doesnt matter what you put before 2. doesnt interest me 3. lacking swerve to the lyrics @other person You did ok, but none of it stood out, swerve more, sting more\ Overall, none of the words or lines "sting" or is something catchy disappointment
altar30
#95146156Wednesday, April 17, 2013 7:54 PM GMT

Fair enough and actually true pertaining to my part. I made my verse a couple months ago and decided to throw on some friends before release. Thanks for the feedback bro :)
Lucario42t
#95147482Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:08 PM GMT

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stuntddude
#95148267Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:17 PM GMT

So where's the music?
KieraAllayn
#95149462Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:31 PM GMT

ok these are some of my later raps wheni was on that swag crap... so it's whatever but i ummmmm have yet to see anything of yours?
jason8630
#95149486Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:31 PM GMT

now if only this was about an actual tragedy
EverquestI
#95150226Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:40 PM GMT

group threads cant come soon enough
shonyshon
#95150377Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:42 PM GMT

@Everquestl Cry me a river. It'll never happen.
johnb
#95150550Wednesday, April 17, 2013 8:44 PM GMT

CRY ME A RIVER BORGORE yoiyoyiyoioyoiyiyoyioyiy yuhuhututhutuhtuuhthut GRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU
AnUnfriendlyGuest999
#95156615Wednesday, April 17, 2013 9:38 PM GMT

I kan kry a river. Where do you think the Nile and the Euphratez kame from? People made me zad with their UnBazedizm.
Supreme_Kevin
#95157370Wednesday, April 17, 2013 9:45 PM GMT

All good except keke.... Sorry.
jason8630
#95157409Wednesday, April 17, 2013 9:45 PM GMT

keke be givin dat good head tho
johnb
#95157483Wednesday, April 17, 2013 9:46 PM GMT

Not a lot of chicks on MT can do that. Big ups keke
altar30
#95159095Wednesday, April 17, 2013 10:01 PM GMT

lol this got really random really fast XD
AnUnfriendlyGuest999
#95160076Wednesday, April 17, 2013 10:10 PM GMT

That'z how we roll.
ducky981
#95160725Wednesday, April 17, 2013 10:16 PM GMT

this gets a 4/10. you guys suck. learn how to rap.
altar30
#95160732Wednesday, April 17, 2013 10:16 PM GMT

Can I get some actually feedback though :/
KieraAllayn
#95229432Thursday, April 18, 2013 8:22 PM GMT

thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it
Supreme_Kevin
#95235646Thursday, April 18, 2013 9:23 PM GMT

Well like I said Keke you were on the bottom of this chain.... But I will say you did good.
jason8630
#95241240Thursday, April 18, 2013 10:15 PM GMT

^you said they were all good but her,
KieraAllayn
#95323372Friday, April 19, 2013 9:22 PM GMT

alright thanks i'll work harder next time :)

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