Eh, I found the joke very unoriginal; and the fact that you (and the other guy?) were really quiet so it sound really underdeveloped. Also, the song in the video was poorly synced and would occasionally skip; also giving an extra line by mistake.
Also, you actually messed up the lyrics. You wrote. "Gimme like waffles." ...What? It is 'Yes, we like waffles." However...
It was a really good first try, and for someone who probably doesn't work much with video making it is definitely a great start. I recommend fixing some of the problems I mentioned if you want to improve your quality. |