ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Well, I'm practicing this on a guitar, and I'll be posting this on sound cloud whenever possible. Until then, I hope you like this song, and please rate so I can get better! Thank you! :]
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[Verse I]
Whenever you're not with me
I feel somewhat empty
Sorry for all the love I took for granted
And all the bitter things I chanted
But at the end of the day
I knew we'd be okay
And I pray, and pray
That I'll see you again someday
I'm counting all the days goin by
But you're the only thing on my mind...
[Chorus] Every time I close my eyes
( I'm thinking of you )
Every time I see a sun rise
( I'm thinking of you )
Every time I see this empty spot next to me...
I'm thinking of you.
[Verse II]
I know when girls are sad sometimes
they eat ice cream
But how can I?
When it reminds me of your smile
that used to gleam...
We would share it together
and talk about plans about 'us' forever
But now we can't anymore
Because the only thing here with me
are the tears on the floor
And I pray, and pray
That I'll see you again someday
I'm counting all the days goin by
But you're the only thing on my mind...
[Chorus]
When you were with me
It felt like my heart could fly
But now all I can do is ask "Why?"
And say "I never got a goodbye..."
[Chorus] Every time I close my eyes
( I'm thinking of you )
Every time I see a sun rise
( I'm thinking of you )
Every time I see this empty spot next to me...
I'm thinking of you.
Every time I close my eyes...
Every time I see a sun rise...
Every time I see this empty spot next to me...
....I'm thinking of you.
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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Be with me |
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@johnb xD
@Chanel OMG I LOVE THIS :D 10/10!
You know, I can kinda see Taylor Swift singing this for some reason....
Or Carrie Underwood.... either one. Just some female country signer xD. |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Thank you :D
And cmon now ppl, over 100+ (thank yu! x3) views and only 2 replies? D:
I need feedback! HONEST feedback pls!
Thanks! ^3^ |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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What can I say? It's MEDi all around, big ups. |
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This is hilarious, I can imagine this as some cheesy pop song from the 90's.
Also how can you write a song about something you've never felt, cuz I really doubt you've ever felt this before |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Lol you can see as whatever you like! ^-^
Have you :o? I mean I haven't, but I've felt something close to it before. |
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No offense of course, it's just how I see it.
And no I have never felt it before, I'm too young.
And by the way, for what your song is, you've got talent. |
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Lou_DogJoin Date: 2010-09-07
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Yo,chanel.
Why did you leave Aftermath?
And nice song. |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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I didn't want to, but I had so many people on my case sayin "you won't be taken seriously" or "fail move", etc. I don't know what the big problem is, but yeah.
And thank you! :D |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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I don't know what the big problem is, but yeah.
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Maybe because that label is associated with IwantPSP? |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Why does everybody hate iwantpsp so much? He's a cool guy to know T3T. |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Awell. So how's everybody doin? Lol |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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I'd be doin a whole lot better if I had you |
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PenBladeJoin Date: 2012-12-27
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Wow, actually not bad. You surprised me. Good job.
7/10. |
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PenBladeJoin Date: 2012-12-27
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John, you shouldn't rush these things. Lol. |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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Thank you Pen! :D |
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ChanelGJoin Date: 2013-04-12
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@john and Pen
Lol |
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ducky980Join Date: 2012-09-01
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4/10 |
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