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neongoo51
#147884143Monday, October 13, 2014 3:40 PM GMT

Delayed because I forgot to post it a couple of times, or didn't feel like it. DISCLAIMERS AND STUFF: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=142364727 Prologue: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=142364866 Chapter 1: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=142569620 Chapter 2: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=142755905 Chapter 3: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=143266670 Chapter 4: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=143461431 Chapter 5: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=143651360 Chapter 6: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=143827005 Chapter 7: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144004112 Chapter 8: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144143844 Chapter 9: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144393978 Chapter 10: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144548162 Chapter 11: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144719606 Chapter 12: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144873496 Chapter 13: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145075040 Chapter 14: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145256268 Chapter 15: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145379989 Chapter 16: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145547825 Chapter 17: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145711351 Chapter 18: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145834880 Chapter 19: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=145949084 Chapter 20: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146119668 Chapter 21: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146253654 Chapter 22: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146360912 Chapter 23: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146485632 Chapter 24: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146632492 Chapter 25: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146737217 Chapter 26: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=146855347 Chapter 27: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=147439917 Chapter 28: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=147560335 So, what became of everyone after this? I don't know about everyone, but about the few that I do know about... Kalyrian's investigations were successful, so he became a professional investigator. He now investigates everything and anything suspicious that happens in OT (even if it isn't suspicious at all). MagentaDelight finally got introduced to RT. By who? She had to introduce herself since no one could do it for her anymore. Eriknelson1 became a successful nanoscientist. Well, maybe not-so-successful, since he developed a fear of tiny objects after days of researching micrOTers. Marolex is resting in LMaD. He had to rethink himself after his plans were foiled by the OTMF. Sisteena decided to become a part of OT. In fact, she had ideas about joining OT long before the entire thing started, but didn't because she was too loyal to Marolex. Akrylix decided to stop being a test subject and became a painter after his adventures as a micrOTer. Although he isn't much of a painter right now, I bet he will be one day. Anikinis, OTJuice, ExpShare and Hiloman... No one really knows what happened to them. This is the last that I ever heard from them: "ANIKINIS, OTJUICE AND EXPSHARE, LISTEN UP! WE ARE GOING TO PROVE TO THOSE PESKY HUMANS THAT MICROTERS ARE THE ULTIMATE CREATURES!" "YESSIR!" "OF COURSE!" "GOT IT!" "AND OUR FIRST TARGET IS RT! LET'S GET A MOVE ON, NOW!" The end ...I think. --[[ Shoot, I accidentally made another post. ¤ Your Alt is under my Ctrl.
MrPhelps
#147886507Monday, October 13, 2014 4:24 PM GMT

When will the movie be made? This deserves a movie. An accurate movie. ~OT Arkham Knight~
CookieRonster
#147886575Monday, October 13, 2014 4:25 PM GMT

"When will the movie be made? This deserves a movie. An accurate movie." (2)
pft479
#147934980Tuesday, October 14, 2014 11:04 AM GMT

Good job!! :) You're breaking my pixel heart!
neongoo51
#147940390Tuesday, October 14, 2014 4:05 PM GMT

Now, I'll give you a few questions... - Which chapter was your favorite chapter? - Which chapter could've been done better? - On a scale of 1-10, how good am I for a story-writer? --[[ Shoot, I accidentally made another post. ¤ Your Alt is under my Ctrl.
d4rk652
#147940426Tuesday, October 14, 2014 4:06 PM GMT

"Oh what's this." "Chapter 1-28' Why do I always miss everything until there's to much of it to catch up on.
pft479
#147940703Tuesday, October 14, 2014 4:15 PM GMT

Favorite : Chapter 14 I think they were all good, the way they were. I liked all of them. 9/10 You're breaking my pixel heart!
MrPhelps
#148127529Friday, October 17, 2014 11:26 PM GMT

Hm... Fav chapter... Hard to say. I loved the ending. Probably the last few chapters. As far as your rating, probably an 8/10. Definitely very good, but room for improvement. But hey, that's better than the score I gave myself. ~OT Arkham Knight~
Baconite
#153718582Sunday, January 11, 2015 2:17 PM GMT

that was amazing!

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