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NOTICE: This in no way is intended for PA. The guy gave me permission to write this story. I’m also not indenting to start a flame war. I’m only doing it for the lulz.
Part 1
“Sigh” came the voice in a house. It was a young man. He was buttoning his shirt, and tying his tie. He grabbed his suitcase and was out the door. He had an important meeting to go to. He would get there by bus; witch would deliver him to an airport. He sat down on the bus stop bench. He looked to his left. There were two other people. An elderly woman, and a guy staring at the clouds. He figured it would be a couple of hours before the bus came. He stretched his arm, and set it on the top of the bench. The man sitting next to him looked at his wrist. “That’s a new blox watch.” He said. “It looks nice.” “Thanks.” The man said. “My names Daggerbro.” He said. “Pleasure to meet you.” The man said. He shook Daggerbro’s hand. “My mama used to have a watch like that.” Dagger said. “It was a long long time ago….” He began. The man listened to Daggerbro’s story. This is his story.
To be concluded
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SaltyBootJoin Date: 2010-09-16
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I dont know what to say here, ill just give it a rating out of 10.
1(horrible)-10(amazing)
STORY RATING: -3 |
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SaltyBootJoin Date: 2010-09-16
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minus 203 noob. |
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Part 2
It was 2005. Dagger was sound asleep in his “Happy Home in Robloxia.” “Get up you noob.” Came a voice. Daggerbros eyes fluttered open.” Yawn. waddya make me for breakfast?” He asked. It was his mother. “NOTHING. Now get to school.”
Dagger walked out the door without any breakfast. He was pretty hungry. The school bus came, and he got in. He walked down the aisles. Nobody wanted him next to them. Then, he noticed a girl, sitting by the window. He walked over to her. “What’s yer name?” He asked her. “Meg.” The girl replied. “Can I sit here?” “No” “Thanks.” Daggerbro sat next to Meg. “Get away from me.” Meg said. “Wanna be friends?” Dagger asked her. Meg slammed her head against the bus window. “Life really is unpredictable.” “Life is like the front page.” Daggerbro said. “Ya never know what your gunna get.”
At school, dagger had a seizure in class. At PE, he ate a baseball. He was sent to the nurse. The nurse let him call his mom.” Mama I miss you.” “Shut up I’m trying to sleep.”
Daggerbro hung up. He felt fine. He had made a new friend, and he had talked to his mama early. He walked back to class, only to trip on his shoelace at the front door. Everyone laughed at him. “I HATE YOU ALL!” Dagger screamed at the top of his lungs. He picked up an eraser, and threw it at one kid. He was sent to detention.
To be concluded
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@saltyboot
Thanks for the constructive critism! Everyone needs it. |
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kopakaXJoin Date: 2009-08-27
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ITS OVER -9000!!!! Just kidding. |
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i like this story. more please. |
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zombieufoJoin Date: 2010-06-18
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AWSOME lol forest gump |
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I liek eet.
11.9113813265908469032/1
>_> Translation?
Epic Face/10
>_>...Other Translation?!
EPICSAUCE!
Oooooh... I feel special. =3 |
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Meg10Join Date: 2009-07-01
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Yayz! Moar plox |
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guys just ignore salty. Havent you guys noticed he is the new troll around here? He spammed 2 FULL PAGES OF ROLEPLAY with random post topics. |
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lol spartan never disappoints!
OVAR 9000!!!!/10 |
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Meg10Join Date: 2009-07-01
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13 trillion out of ten. |
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Part 3
"Grrrrr." Daggerbro was sitting at his desk, growling to himself. He was in detention. He didnt get to go home and see his mama. "Dumb noobs....grrrr....reported all of you.....grrr...." One kid was staring at him. "Your a noob." He called daggerbro. "Noobish is what Noobish does. And i know im not a noob." Daggerbro replied. "During detention." The teacher began. "You may work on your homework. Daggerbro pulled a notebook out of his backpack. He looked at question 1:
1: 2+5=?
Dagger struggled with it. He thought and though. Finally, he awnserd:
1: 2+5=1
Meg was walking home. She had her hair in front of her eyes, so nobody would see her. She was embarased that Daggerbro had called her a "friend". "HAI MEG!" Came a voice behind her. She didnt have to look behind her, to know it was Dagger. "do you need help wif your hw? cuz im a super smart. mah mama says so." "get away from me." Meg said, trying to steer in the other direction. "OWWWWWCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Daggerbro cried. Meg looked, to see the boys from school standing there. They were trowing rocks at daggerbro. "you moron! you threw an eraser at my little brother!" One of them yelled. Dagger took off. Meg yelled behind him.
"REPORT, DAGGER, REPORT!" She cried after him. Daggerbro reported the kids, then ran all the way home. Meg smiled. She was safe....for now.
Daggerbro walked up to his house. "AM HOME NAO MAMA!" He yelled, slamming his head into the door. Then, he heard screaming coming from inside.
to be concluded
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Aww, ShizNoodles. Meg likes Daggerbro?! IMPOSSIBLE |
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Meg10Join Date: 2009-07-01
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Say wut. I would stand up for ANY other noob. Just. Not. Dagger. Fail.
(I think he did that so he could use that line from Forest Gump. Maybe its becouse Im so awesome that I feel I should stand up for him!) |
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Spartan: EXACTLY! Hmm...Now Doro's turn.
Doro: Shiz ._. |
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THE SUSPENSE! ITS KEELING MEH!
Wat hapn 2 dagrz mama? |
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Meg10Join Date: 2009-07-01
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She looked in the mirror |
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i think meg helped him so he would run away and then she would be safe FROM HIM |
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Meg10Join Date: 2009-07-01
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Or that. |
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